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Played Character Mirabella Wymarc

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Acosmism

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  • Full name
    • Born name: Guðlaug Ásdísardóttir
      • Given name: Mirabella Reneé Wymarc
      • Nickname: Mira
  • Heritage/Culture
    • Slovenin Ailor
  • Age
    • 312
      • Appears to be in her 30s-40s
  • Gender/Pronouns
    • Female, She/Her
  • Occult
    • Bremnevel Vampirism, Void Magic
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The flower fades and we become dust, at the end of each day.
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  • Core concept
    • A Vampire Matron roaming the sewers and gathering support for her unholy endeavors.
  • Appearance
    • Mirabella stands at a staggering height of 6'3",
  • Attack and Defense Stat
    • Attack: Magic
    • Defense: Wisdom
  • Proficiencies
    • Strength: 0
    • Constitution: 0
      • Shield Taunt (Ailor - Free)
      • Familiar Disrupt (Ailor - Free)
    • Intelligence: 2
      • Shapeshift Pack
      • Oceanic Pack
    • Wisdom: 7
      • Medical Revive
      • Medical Stance (Free)
      • Medical Rescue
      • Chem Bloodboil
      • Chem Mend
      • Chem Bang
      • Chem Cleanse
      • Technique Parry
    • Dexterity: 1
      • Roguery
    • Faith: 0
    • Magic: 4
      • Magic Revive
      • Magic Lifebind
      • Magic Cleanse
      • Magic Smog
  • Languages
    • Barrudh
    • Vaman
    • Réginyelv
    • Common
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I built you up over centuries and this is how you thank me?
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  • Alignment
    • Neutral Evil
      • "I'll take what I want—"
  • Personality Type
    • Commander ENTJ-T
      • "— And you'll help me do it."
  • Religion
    • 0/10 Atheistic — She hates the idea of any deity claiming to have control or authority. She refuses to bow to anyone or anything, and will not subject herself to the "weak practice of ritualism."
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Value comes from your actions, not your intent.
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  • May 15th, 0 A.C. - Child of the Cataclysm.
    • Guðlaug Ásdísardóttir was born mere months after the catastrophic Cataclysmic warfare; her family ended up practically washed ashore upon Drixagh. With them, they brought tales of horrid battles and beastly monsters that the natural world had in store for the Ailor. Amongst the Velheim settlements, they proclaimed words of peace and honor, thus sparking what is known today as the Fridurfolk culture.
  • 1-24
    • Guðlaug was raised in a peaceful household, wearing her hair long and keeping her head held high in trying times. The second, and last, child of the Ásdísardóttir family was born in 23 A.C., deeming Guðlaug the eldest. She watched the child with care and inherited her mother's parental tendencies. Her father all the while stayed relatively busy, fishing for the local markets and selling his catchings. She took a brief intermission to attend schooling for medicinal and commanding purposes, hoping to become her village's doctor. Over the years she grew in grace, expected to marry soon as she rounded her twenty-fourth birthday. However, that didn't happen.
  • The Turning
    • Vampires in the North grew bold as their population expanded, a mere six years before the Great Vampire Wars started, their aggression was rising to high standards. Guðlaug often traveled alone in nearby walds and woods of her settlement in Drixagh, however, such was a mistake one evening as a group of Fledgling Dorkarths were after blood, the eve of their first Fledgling Hunt. Guðlaug was a case of the wrong place at the wrong time, struck down by the group of Fledglings and left for dead. However, their leader came by a woman who spoke of peace and sanctuary in Dorkarth, who took Guðlaug in arms and offered her a new life amongst the Sanguine in their state. Regardless if she was compliant or not, she was turned, thus marking her new life; a life from which she would never return.
  • 25-89 - The Great Vampire Wars
    • Guðlaug settled into Dorkarth with struggle, but the affliction did its job, working its way to infest itself within her mind. From the very beginning, she was vehemently against the use of Uhr-Beasts in Dorkarth, following the teachings of a coven leader she viewed as wise. Guðlaug participated in the Great Vampire Wars as a general once her education was brought to light. Hoping to climb the ladder of Sanguineous politics, with a newfound vigor for her state's population, her ambition for Dorkarth sadly missed the mark as the vampires lost the war.
  • 89-120
    • Guðlaug lingered in Dorkarth for many years, training young broods after the wars and indulging in a more guiding hand to the state. Her position in Dorkarth was quite clearly obsolete as her life went on, her various failed academies within the state she tried to build up only growing in size. After hearing whispers of an old coven leader fleeing off to Morass Willow Wald in West Anglia, she decided she had best follow in their footsteps. By then she had not been cured once, becoming inherently attached to the affliction come her one-hundredth year of living. It was then that she realized she, as an Ailor, must now depend on it for her life.
  • 120-250
    • In nature, she buried herself, enveloped within it in a frenzy of addiction to the surrounding flora and fauna which writhed in corruption. She was so engrossed that rumors spread about her vampiric circle that her very heart was made of floral matter. As she continued guarding the walds, multiple attacks ensued by Anglian Witches, Witches she deemed a corruption of existence itself. She was not simply sitting in wait, she was planning. Death accompanied her as she decided to exit the walds, traveling to Axford, Pyres of competition stacked high in the sky. The night was filled with fire, but when the sun rose, dozens of Anglian Witches had perished. After her success, she reveled in the glory, though with her newfound public antagonism, she was forced into hiding once again. In the woods she dwelled as a guiding hand for those who would listen, and who would follow, eventually forming her own coven based on healing from the lost wars.
  • 250-312
    • Some of her kin died off, others stayed. Life was repetitive until she neared the third century of life, viewed as wise and seasoned. After three centuries on the earth and not enough to show for it, she left those under her guidance in favor of one such city deemed "holy," and what better to corrupt than a self-proclamation of "holiness?" Upon arrival, however, she realized perhaps she should have given it a little more claim to its name. Chased off into the sewers by Violets on the spot, she resided in the dark for three days and three nights scouring for a home. After viewing the state of the Sanguineous population of Regalia she took it upon herself to reform the Athanasia Scion.
      • She now proclaims herself to be the mother of all Sanguine, vowing to protect the vampiric population at all costs. With her new vow, her bloodline advanced once more to accommodate her wishes, and she graced a new name: Mirabella Wymarc.
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Nothing compares to the sanctuary of nature.
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Claimed for review.​
 
@ninjabug505

  • Your body stat calculation is not listed, and I'm not sure how you reached 45 body stat. Judging by your current stats, it should be something like:
    2.5 from Bodycare Training + 15 from Hunting Knowledge + 15 from Unarmed Fighting = 32.5 body stat total (Rounded up to 33)

  • Additionally, your character's race is listed as Sanguine. Vampires are not a race, they are a disease that infects a person. I.E. a character could be an Ailor Vampire, or an Altalar Vampire, but not just a Vampire. Judging by your ref image and listed appearance, your character fits as an Ailor. Pick a Lineage and Culture, and adapt your life story accordingly. While Vampires can reproduce, they'd also create Vampire Broods, which can be found here.

  • Your linguistics knowledge also allows for you to do far more than just learn Zcorr. You can find information on it here. If you want to only learn Zcorr, you're welcome to lower your linguistics knowledge to five and change the rest of your points accordingly. You'll also be allowed to take an extra human language based on the culture you pick for your character.
Otherwise, your life story and application is all good. Take time to rectify what I've mentioned.
 
@ninjabug505

  • Your body stat calculation is not listed, and I'm not sure how you reached 45 body stat. Judging by your current stats, it should be something like:
    2.5 from Bodycare Training + 15 from Hunting Knowledge + 15 from Unarmed Fighting = 32.5 body stat total (Rounded up to 33)

  • Additionally, your character's race is listed as Sanguine. Vampires are not a race, they are a disease that infects a person. I.E. a character could be an Ailor Vampire, or an Altalar Vampire, but not just a Vampire. Judging by your ref image and listed appearance, your character fits as an Ailor. Pick a Lineage and Culture, and adapt your life story accordingly. While Vampires can reproduce, they'd also create Vampire Broods, which can be found here.

  • Your linguistics knowledge also allows for you to do far more than just learn Zcorr. You can find information on it here. If you want to only learn Zcorr, you're welcome to lower your linguistics knowledge to five and change the rest of your points accordingly. You'll also be allowed to take an extra human language based on the culture you pick for your character.
Otherwise, your life story and application is all good. Take time to rectify what I've mentioned.

thank you! I must have misread the mandatory mutations for Doughall, I thought it said that the minimum body stat for a Doughall was 45. I'll go back and read it again :)

I will edit this and make changes as soon as possible.
 
@ninjabug505

  • Your body stat calculation is not listed, and I'm not sure how you reached 45 body stat. Judging by your current stats, it should be something like:
    2.5 from Bodycare Training + 15 from Hunting Knowledge + 15 from Unarmed Fighting = 32.5 body stat total (Rounded up to 33)

  • Additionally, your character's race is listed as Sanguine. Vampires are not a race, they are a disease that infects a person. I.E. a character could be an Ailor Vampire, or an Altalar Vampire, but not just a Vampire. Judging by your ref image and listed appearance, your character fits as an Ailor. Pick a Lineage and Culture, and adapt your life story accordingly. While Vampires can reproduce, they'd also create Vampire Broods, which can be found here.

  • Your linguistics knowledge also allows for you to do far more than just learn Zcorr. You can find information on it here. If you want to only learn Zcorr, you're welcome to lower your linguistics knowledge to five and change the rest of your points accordingly. You'll also be allowed to take an extra human language based on the culture you pick for your character.
Otherwise, your life story and application is all good. Take time to rectify what I've mentioned.
Changes were made in cyan. I hope this covers everything, apologies if I missed anything.
 
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@ninjabug505 List your character's lineage (which is Drahl, as a Norean must have two Norean parents) and culture in the Race section. Add that they are a Brood, and change their appearance and race section accordingly, as two Vampires reproducing would create a Brood. Additionally, add Fénikin as a language, and round your physical stat up to 33.
 
@ninjabug505 List your character's lineage (which is Drahl, as a Norean must have two Norean parents) and culture in the Race section. Add that they are a Brood, and change their appearance and race section accordingly, as two Vampires reproducing would create a Brood. Additionally, add Fénikin as a language, and round your physical stat up to 33.
Additional changed made in green.
 
Made adjustments to proficiency points, changes made in red.
 
@ninjabug505 In the future, please mark your application as Needs Re-Review. Regardless, re-approved.​
 
@ninjabug505 Pulling this back into review after a mistake was brought to my attention.
  • You can only put a maximum of fifteen points into linguistics knowledge. Please move those five points elsewhere.
 
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┊Basics┊

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Full name

⇢☽ Mirabella Reneé Wymarc


Nicknames

⇢☽ Mira, Bell, Bella


Age

⇢☽ Appears 25, is technically 84


Gender
⇢☽ Female


Race

⇢☽ Ailor, brood, infected by vampirism. Drahl, Fridurfolk culture.



Sexuality
⇢☽ Bisexual


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┊ Skill information ┊

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Total points

⇢☽ 60

⇢☽ 10 Musical Arts

⇢☽ 20 Linguistic Knowledge

⇢☽ 20 Unarmed Combat Skill

⇢☽ 15 Hunting Knowledge

⇢☽ 5 Bodycare Training


Body Shape

☽ 2.5 Bodycare Training + 15 Hunting Knowledge + 15 Unarmed Combat Skill = 32.5, rounded to 33.

⇢☽ Athletic

⇢☽ Low Body Fat



Languages
⇢☽ Common (learned in childhood)

⇢☽ Zcorr (Linguistics Knowledge)

⇢☽ Skodje (Linguistics Knowledge)

⇢☽ Mirnoye Dialect (Linguistics Knowledge)

⇢☽ Fénikin



Special mutations

⇢☽ Vampire: Mountain Winters

⇢☽ Vampire: Mountain Hardening

⇢☽ Vampire: Mountain Skyward

⇢☽ Vampire: Mountain Healing



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┊Visual Information ┊

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⇢☽ Eye Color: Rainbow irises with a prismatic sheen to them, red when feeding

⇢☽ Hair Color: Chocolate

⇢☽ Hair Style: Simple long with waves

⇢☽ Skin Color: Pale Ivory

⇢☽ Clothing: French Gothic

⇢☽ Height: 5'6"


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┊Personality and Abilities┊

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Alignment

⇢☽ Chaotic Evil


Personality Type

⇢☽ Commander.


Religion
⇢☽ Void Worship, and on a scale of 1-10, about a 3-ish (really whenever it's convenient for her).


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┊ life story ┊

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Early Life

⇢☽ Mirabella was born April 11th, 211 A.C. to two sanguines, Ambra Wymarc and Vittorio Wymarc (Doughall), two married ailors who were turned. Her father was of Drahl lineage, her mother was Norean. Both were of the Fridurfolk culture. Her mother passed in childbirth, her father raised her, in Dorkarth.

⇢☽ She learned Zcorr by a Varran who was captured, to be put in the lot with the rest of the cattle. Mira often talked to him when he was alive and he taught her many things, including Zcorr and what Regalia was like.

⇢☽ Her relationship with her father was good, they were fairly close, though he left for either days or weeks for reasons unbeknownst to her, though later she would find he was collecting cattle.

⇢☽ Mirabella was not sad to have not met her mother. She was neutral. It didn't upset her in the slightest.



Adult

⇢☽ Mirabella began to join her father in his excursions to collect food and explore.

⇢☽ Mirabella's father was captured on one of their excursions due to them being reckless, not careful enough. After he was captured, a cure was forced onto him, and he died as a result of no food or water while being imprisoned as a mortal.

⇢☽ She eventually worked her way up to being well-respected (by those who knew her), known for her unarmed combat. She trained young broods.


Older-Present

⇢☽ Mirabella got tired of Dorkarth, wondered why she was staying there when she could go out and help vampires conquer and populate the world. She left Dorkarth at the age of 50, and travelled, now more careful than she used to be since her fathers death. She didn't want to be cured like he was.

⇢☽ Mira met many people as she travelled, and she travelled for roughly three decades before more recently settling in Regalia, the place that the Varran talked of when she was younger. She doesn't remember much of those days of early life, but she did remember the Varran, and what he said of Regalia. She was happy to see that other Sanguines reside there as well and quickly became accustomed to the area. Still continuing to learn and grow.
@ninjabug505 Pulling this back into review after a mistake was brought to my attention.
  • You can only put a maximum of fifteen points into linguistics knowledge. Please move those five points elsewhere.
Thank you for bringing this to my attention, will fix this asap.
 
@fantuinn Made changes in proficiency due to not be used in roleplay, as well as editing languages for the same purpose.
 
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@fantuinn Made drastic changes to the backstory to better fit her ancient character role, and I tweaked proficiencies a tad. Tweaks in proficiencies in blue. Thank you, sorry for the tag (:
 
@Acosmism
  • Your backstory is 1,130 words (not including titles). Backstories are capped at 900 words. Rectify this when you can.
 
Erm, I was re-wording one of the quotes and somehow lost the approved tag? Not sure how that happened
 
@fantuinn Yep, you guessed it: made changes to proficiencies with the new update. Also I'll be adding mutations sometime soon but today is not that day. Thank you!
 
@fantuinn Through IC events, Mirabella has adapted into some Void Worship. Derived from existing deities and beliefs she's made up on her own, specifically. It's become significant enough to the point where I thought it would be appropriate to add some Ritualism in for this as well as update the religious portion of her application. I might write in a portion of that into her backstory but I doubt I can fit it all under 900 words when it's so close already, I am a big over-writer...as you can tell. So, thank you in advance! Sorry for the tag. All changes were made in Red.
 
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@fantuinn Shifted some proficiencies, and also... requesting to swap out Mountain Hardening for Mountain Seasons... if such is possible...,,,,,,
 
@fantuinn Hi hello yes... I... did something kinda funky. Retconned her race, shifted proficiencies, tweaked her backstory just a TEENSY little bit. Plan on turning her kathar in the future some point down the road to enhance more of the evil "Void-y" things and less of the pretty rainbow things, as I realize it does not fit into the nature of a vampire.
 
I will Approve this application but 1) I would heavily encourage you to shrink your "aesthetics", it made reading this application extremely difficult. and 2) do not change your character's Race again. We are taking a firmer stance to changes like this that extremely alter a character's racial abilities and background. If you do it again, the change will be scrutinized for why you did it to the character.
 
I will Approve this application but 1) I would heavily encourage you to shrink your "aesthetics", it made reading this application extremely difficult. and 2) do not change your character's Race again. We are taking a firmer stance to changes like this that extremely alter a character's racial abilities and background. If you do it again, the change will be scrutinized for why you did it to the character.

Already talked to you about it but I decided against the retconning of Mirabella's original race as I put more thought into it, and determined that it simply did not fit nor did it really make any sense. Because on one hand, you have "cool abilities and possibilities and potential from this other race" (I was planning on dread rebirth) but then on the other hand you have historical accuracy pertaining to lore and drawing parallels to what would make sense in this given time period and/or like of action in correlation to the infection, since that is part of her character: "sanguine first, anything else secondary" namely, race.

So, all that being said, Mirabella's race has been changed back to Drahl Ailor of the Fridurfolk culture and thusly her racial abilities have been switched out accordingly, alongside her racial boost and life story. Changes in proficiency as well as race and abilities and such have been marked in red, minus the backstory portion, because having like 5 paragraphs of just RED is annoying.
Also not sure who to tag but I'll go ahead and slap both of your names down, feel free to bonk me over the head for future reference if this is incorrect @fantuinn @HydraLana

believe it or not I was thinking about it for a while so NO this wasn't a last minute decision <3 unlike many of my past decisions
 
@fantuinn Update go brrr
-Edited backstory (again) to better fit updated bloodline backstory.
-Added vampiric form
-Added ability list

I honestly wasn't sure if I was supposed to get this re-review here on forums or on the permission channel in discord so if I've made a mistake please let me know :^)