Played Character Izel Mecatl

[WildSages]

 

[WildSages]

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Spoiler: Relationships

Kin || family

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Allynna Marais ✤ Worry Daughter
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Larsen Marais ✤ Baby Son
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤ Bond

Dear Companions|| Close friends

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Aeda Kee'lyth ✤ Great-Mother
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Bond
Si'Zralli ✤ Medic in Crime
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤ Trust
Narla ✤ My Hope
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust

Allies|| friends and acquaintances​

Faran Hasylas ✤ Welcomer
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust
Kayhdin Kee'lyth ✤ Jokester
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Haszlal ✤ Orca
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust
Theo Kee'lyth ✤ Open Hands
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Tullion Kearney ✤ Aeda's Husband
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust
Cazna Gahan ✤ Wise Words
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust
Dathil ✤ Bundle Joy
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Hera Von Hal ✤ Guidance
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇 Trust
Henrich Von Schwarzkrau✤ Employer
⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Eletha Darrath ✤ Snake Fright
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Fiorella Peirgarten ✤ The Starter of Dreams
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Hy'riss✤ Strong Arm
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Tim Burros ✤ Blondie Unionist
⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Saren ✤ Smiling Canine
⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Sivrid Sorenvik ✤ True Direction
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇 Trust
Aailyah Hithaerben ✤ Qadir Medic
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Valenia Aetris ✤ Child's Voice
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust
Harlow Ketch✤ Bossy Man
⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Revna✤ Tough Url
⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇〇〇 Trust
Argo ✤ Elder
⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤〇〇〇〇 Trust

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[helioark]

@WildSages Accepted. Thank you for being open to the changes.

 

[helioark]

@WildSages Approved.

 

[helioark]

@WildSages Approved. I will clean up soon.

 

[helioark]

@WildSages Thread cleaned up. If you want more comments deleted, let me know.

 

[Yurs]

Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly

 

[Yurs]

App looks great! Your aesthetics are MAD cute and honestly making me want to redo my own apps.

APPROVED

 

[Yurs]

Looks fine!

APPROVED

 

[Yurs]

APPROVED

 

[Yurs]

VERY GOOD

There's just two things I need clarified before I can approve this:

• You currently have 50 points listed as spent, but have only invested 47 points. Would you like the unspent 3 to remain uninvested for IC learning, or would you like to put them into something?
• Please add a blurb in the sorcery section specifying which plane Sage's magic comes from (Void/Exist)

That's all! Go ahead and tag me once you've done that and I can approve it ASAP

 

[Yurs]

APPROVED

 

[Yurs]

Expect a reply shortly!

 

[Yurs]

APPROVED

 

[Yurs]

Claimed for review!

APPROVED

 

[FireFan96]

@WildSages my review:

• Increase the font size. It's hard to read on my 17.3-inch display, and the PC is superior to mobile in all aspects.
• I'd just set the age at 29. There is not a notable difference in appearance between 25 and 29.
• I would update the Languages to fit some minor shadow edits on the wiki, such as Saan and d'Ithanie.
• Remove the Progression Information section. It doesn't exist.

tag me when you've made these changes

 

[FireFan96]

reapproved @WildSages

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[Caelamus]

Visual Information

-Izel is a Maquixtl with dark black hair, her skin is a dark chestnut color and her complexion is quite clear with a few moles and freckles here and there.
-Her height stands to be 5'0" with a toned build., while her fat is about moderate, not completely skinny yet having some squish here and there. Izel's eyes are an olive green, with white semi-glowing pupils. She has skin that is marked by countless tattoos taround her body.
-Vampire form appears to be a red skinned woman with dark tied back hair. Her face is covered by a veil that can only be lifted up to her nose, however her piercing red gaze is visible through it

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This section should be placed under the proficiency/ability/language information. A bit pedantic but it's a bit confusing when I scroll down there to look but it isn't there. Just copy and paste it down there.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved. Sorry for the delay.

 

[WildSages]

Updated Magic Proficiencies.

 

[ezalB]

Hello there.

Plains Elven (Parental), Common, d'Ithanie, Lëtz, Burdi, Altalar, Allorn, Suvial, Sulvaley, Sinnayed, Saan, Katharic, Ibeth, Vasar

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Plains Elven, Burdi, and Allorn are all languages that don't actually exist anymore, and you don't have a Linguist Pack where you attain these. I'd fix this so it just says Saan+Common instead, or invest in the West Linguist Pack.

Special Abilities 14/14

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Just so you're aware, you do get another seven Specials to choose from. 14/21.

Cha: 1
-State Dignitary Pack

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You also get the Pet Husbandry Pack for free, which I would list down here with (Homehappy Special) in parentheses. It doesn't confer a free Charisma point alongside it, to note, however.

Aside from that, Izel sheet look good. Mark changes in blue and @Tag me when all set.

 

[ezalB]

sound good.

Approved.

 

[ezalB]

Oh hyello.

Special Abilities 20/21
Blood Element, Blood Crafter, Pocket Scan, Health Call, Duel Branding, Emote Infuse, Life Wall, Floral Element, Sanctum Vessel, Dressage Cleanse, Time Cleanse, Rune Smithing, Arcane Mastery, Scan Sight, Prison Break, Chain Break, Arcane Sight, Evil Tongues, Dream Element, Time Element, Air Walking

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You have 21, not 20 here. Which is fine though, obviously.

Artificer Specials 0/8
Medical Patent, Lifegiver Patent, Lifecreater Patent, Common Patent, Body-chem patent, Berserk Patent, Hair-chem patent.

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You've also got 7/8 here, so I would just fix that little flavor number.

Both of those are just little minor things though. Also, I think you might have a lot of the application in bullet points, which might be why it's doing weird formatting things? If you're not already editing stuff using "More Options..." in the bottom right of your replies, you definitely should be. But, yeah, I'm not sure, XenForo is a mysterious entity beyond the understanding of most mortals.

Re-approved!

 

[WildSages]

@ezalB i hate u now review my app <3

 

[ezalB]

@ezalB i hate u now review my app <3

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You're such a kind soul

Re-approved.

 

[RaggedyGrace]

Claimed for review!

 

[RaggedyGrace]

Hello! Here's my review:

Everything looks good, and checks out. Approved!

 

[WildSages]

@RaggedyGrace Edited her entire prof list and back story.

 

[RaggedyGrace]

Approved!

 

[WildSages]

updated profs

 

[WildSages]

profs updated

 

[WildSages]

update: aesthetics

 

[SevenBirds]

It's so pretty! Excellent job!

 

[WildSages]

izel prof update