Needs Help/Review Ailin

[Cyrin]

Character Information

• Full Name: Ailin
• Heritage / Culture: Deshret Asha
• Age: (Minimum 18) 22
• Gender / Pronouns: He/Him (Male)
• Religion: Kharma
• Occult:
  • Blood Cursed Marken
• Character Occupation: Alchemist

Appearance Information

• Eye Color: Blue
• Fur Color: White
• Hair: White and Black Flecks
• Height: 6'1
• Body Type: Athletic
• Additional Features: None

Skill Information

• Hobbies and Talents: Alchemy Hobby
• Mechanics:
• Remet Asha can control a special substance called Living Metal, which is a solid Metal that becomes liquid by their thought and imagination, and can be reshaped to whatever they can imagine, and telekinetically moved around.
• Remet Asha have perfect night vision, capable of seeing in dark and low-light environments without needing external lights. Additionally, their claws when struck together create flint and steel like sparks that light up.
• • Remet Asha have a natural bodily reaction to non-combat Magic in their proximity. This can for example cause the fur in their neck to stand upright. It can also be used to warn of a magical presence before it is spotted.
  • Remet Asha have a heightened sense of smell, sight, and hearing out of Combat. This is fairly flexible and should be discussed with people in a scene in terms of what advantages this may give an Asha in varying scenarios.
  • Remet Asha either through a combination of excellent acrobatics, or shock-dampening limbs, or using their claws to slide down buildings, never take damage when falling from heights, so long as this fall is below 50 Blocks.
• Languages:
  • Common
  • Ibeth

Combat Proficiencies and Abilities
Attack Stat: Dexterity
Defense Stat: Constitution
[0/14 points spent]
Proficiency Points:

• Strength: 5
  • Bruiser Stance
  • Bruiser Duel
• Constitution: 4
  • Fortitude Pack
• Intelligence: 4
  • Shapeshift Pack
• Wisdom: 0
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• Dexterity: 2
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• Faith: 0
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• Magic: 0
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• Charisma:0
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