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{ This is not going to be added, I am not special 
. But I wanted some feedback on it, I got bored earlier and remembered a creature that *Ehem* Killed me in a dream, so I created a tid-bit Massivecraft related lore, any questions or edits you suggest i make please don't fret to tell me in this post. Hope you enjoy Ciao!.}
"Ludicro" { Void Lurker } When ones Heart Corrupts.
Deep in the Void, an energy gathers. Hate, Anger, Fear, Rage etc… These emotions create something more… Dark. When a man, women, or even the most innocent of child feels one of these emotions to an unbelievable amount, something always can reflect that. A Creature of sort, one that's only goal is to end its own misery, is formed from these horrid emotions. But, the only way this Creature can die, is by killing its creator. This is the creature's only goal and it will do almost anything to fulfill it. As long as its creator is living, the creature can be destroyed, but only for its soul to be sent back to this Hellish realm. The energy must re-gather to open back its path to "Freedom" (To get back out of the Void). This realm, as we all know it as, is the Void.
In its form on the human's realm, it can only appear in the form of the man or women it is after, but half his or her age. It cannot waste its words, for every word it speaks its human form begins to rot more and more. It rots as if it were an undead, but not by age, but by its voice, It can fight in its human form, but only at half the strength of its creator was at that age. If its creator was a fighter, and a strong one, this creature would lack most of his or her abilities in its human form. Once its human form rots to its end, the creature must climb out of the mouth of its fake skin, ripping what seemed to be a human into shredded rotten grotesque display of the body's remains. This creature will try it's best to find its creator before the body rots, mostly because if it doesn't it is KILL ON SIGHT. Now the creature unleashes its true form. It appears to look like a Prang mantis, but it has many red eyes, dark purple-like skin, and another head under its body facing behind it, It cannot fly but what its weapon is looks like wings, they are not, what you see is its arms with many barbed, poisonous, long spikes. At the back of its body is a tail, at the end of its tail is a mouth that looks like a hole with many teeth. It does not do anything but breathe with that limb, the teeth are not to sharp, but it is still a scaly member of its body, it would have the strength of an orcs arm at an average sized one. It has no reproductive organs. This creature can only have twice the strength of its creator in its true form. If its creator was a child, it will be very small, will have very small barbs, very un-fatal poison, and a very soft tail, nearly the least harmful thing. If it's creator was a fierce warrior, the creature will have a massive size (maybe as big as a full grown orc 6ft-8ft tall, be about 9ft-17ft long from back to front) have very sharp barbs with extremely fatal poison in them, and its tail could knock over a human with ease. If the creature's creator is killed, it as well will instantly drop dead, but it may drop dead much happier than its creator, for its suffering is over.
This creature is called the Ludicro.
Edit: This creature out of it's human from, now can only communicate through blood, it must be in contact with blood of the human it wishes to communicate with.
. But I wanted some feedback on it, I got bored earlier and remembered a creature that *Ehem* Killed me in a dream, so I created a tid-bit Massivecraft related lore, any questions or edits you suggest i make please don't fret to tell me in this post. Hope you enjoy Ciao!.} "Ludicro" { Void Lurker } When ones Heart Corrupts.
Deep in the Void, an energy gathers. Hate, Anger, Fear, Rage etc… These emotions create something more… Dark. When a man, women, or even the most innocent of child feels one of these emotions to an unbelievable amount, something always can reflect that. A Creature of sort, one that's only goal is to end its own misery, is formed from these horrid emotions. But, the only way this Creature can die, is by killing its creator. This is the creature's only goal and it will do almost anything to fulfill it. As long as its creator is living, the creature can be destroyed, but only for its soul to be sent back to this Hellish realm. The energy must re-gather to open back its path to "Freedom" (To get back out of the Void). This realm, as we all know it as, is the Void.
In its form on the human's realm, it can only appear in the form of the man or women it is after, but half his or her age. It cannot waste its words, for every word it speaks its human form begins to rot more and more. It rots as if it were an undead, but not by age, but by its voice, It can fight in its human form, but only at half the strength of its creator was at that age. If its creator was a fighter, and a strong one, this creature would lack most of his or her abilities in its human form. Once its human form rots to its end, the creature must climb out of the mouth of its fake skin, ripping what seemed to be a human into shredded rotten grotesque display of the body's remains. This creature will try it's best to find its creator before the body rots, mostly because if it doesn't it is KILL ON SIGHT. Now the creature unleashes its true form. It appears to look like a Prang mantis, but it has many red eyes, dark purple-like skin, and another head under its body facing behind it, It cannot fly but what its weapon is looks like wings, they are not, what you see is its arms with many barbed, poisonous, long spikes. At the back of its body is a tail, at the end of its tail is a mouth that looks like a hole with many teeth. It does not do anything but breathe with that limb, the teeth are not to sharp, but it is still a scaly member of its body, it would have the strength of an orcs arm at an average sized one. It has no reproductive organs. This creature can only have twice the strength of its creator in its true form. If its creator was a child, it will be very small, will have very small barbs, very un-fatal poison, and a very soft tail, nearly the least harmful thing. If it's creator was a fierce warrior, the creature will have a massive size (maybe as big as a full grown orc 6ft-8ft tall, be about 9ft-17ft long from back to front) have very sharp barbs with extremely fatal poison in them, and its tail could knock over a human with ease. If the creature's creator is killed, it as well will instantly drop dead, but it may drop dead much happier than its creator, for its suffering is over.
This creature is called the Ludicro.
Edit: This creature out of it's human from, now can only communicate through blood, it must be in contact with blood of the human it wishes to communicate with.
