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Work in Progress Ivenn

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"To which direction will you wander?"​


| The Forest | The Tundra | The Ruins |
  • Although more experienced since awakening in the Gloom, Ivenn in his wanderings still searches for knowledge, especially regarding who the people they once were was.
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    Full Name: Iv-enn
    The pieces of a name that was the first real memory that came to them.

    Heritage: Brakin
    Half-Bronn and then half-Hjordi

    Age: 20s?
    It is unknown, though despite the wearied face and slightly greying hair, they look young.

    Gender: Male
    Since they are two, responds mostly to they, despite being male-presenting.

    Character Occupation: Gloomtender
    While being a hermit much more interested in fauna rather then flora, they still tend to both.

    Appearance Information:
    Ivenn, though more outwardly masculine, has an angular, androgynous face framed by bands of metal that intertwine along their head, with draconic metal replacing their neck entirely. Scars mark them heavily, but most are hidden beneath clothing or metal. Teal-blue light glows faintly through tattoos or metallic markings across their body, giving then a quiet, draconic aura. Tall and lean, they wrap fabric under their clothes, partly to pad their asymmetric build and cover scars, partly for comfort. Like other Bralona, they're indifferent to temperature, often seeming oblivious to weather shifts. To avoid standing out, Ivenn dresses plainly, echoing the simple attire of the hunters, gatherers, and shepherds of Gloomrot.

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    This with brass like metal with blue lines on their neck.
  • A refugee from the far north, Ivarr is the sole survivor of his family's exodus from the frozen wastes of Jorrhildr. He wandered with the remnants of those who fled alongside him, watching them fade one by one, some in health, others in character. Though although not completely, their fates reflecting his current fragile existence.​


Proficiencies:
Strength: 5
Technique Parry
Pinning Throw
Force Toss
Steady Body
Oceanic Pack
Brawl Stampede​
Constitution: 7
Shield Block
Tank Charge
Tank Slam
Tank Hero
Tank Watch
Tank Switch
Tank Tremor
Tank Rally
Thick Hide​
Intelligence: 2
Chem Blood Boil
Chem Mend
​
 
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Hi again!

That_One_Echo said:
Core Concept
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Also wouldn't hurt to add a line about religion here either, though I suspect I know what it is.
That_One_Echo said:
Magic: 1
  • School of Displacing
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Be sure to mention which dimension this sis sourced from here.
That_One_Echo said:
After High Command Attempted to take control and started waging war throughout, he decided to ignore and leave the cause, eventually attempts at his free will, chose to abandon a lot of his race.
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So, there is a bit of an issue in the backstory, and that is that no Bralona prior to the Bralona Occupation were against or outside of the Bralla-Bronn High Command. Some operated on the fringes of it (such as being underwater, which is fine), but they were always loyal to High Command, up until the point as which the Rebellion appeared. It's going to make more sense within lore if your character joined that Rebellion following the Occupation, as opposed to before, which isn't possible.

Let me know what you end up changing for the life story, mark those changes with blue, and then tag me when you're all set!
 
@ezalB Religion isn't really necessary in his steps. So I feel there is really no reason to add it, as it is up to determination at this point.

For the backstory, sorry about the confusing wording. I meant that he did start fighting in rebellion against High Command during the attacks on Regalia, but that in the beginning he was just more detached than the rest of the kind while still staying a part of it. I'll change it if it must to fit better, but I just wanted to let you know.
 
That_One_Echo said:
@ezalB Religion isn't really necessary in his steps. So I feel there is really no reason to add it, as it is up to determination at this point.

For the backstory, sorry about the confusing wording. I meant that he did start fighting in rebellion against High Command during the attacks on Regalia, but that in the beginning he was just more detached than the rest of the kind while still staying a part of it. I'll change it if it must to fit better, but I just wanted to let you know.
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All sounds and looks good- and I would mark this approved, were it not for the Proficiency updates last night. Just update your Melee, Defensive, and Ranged abilities and we good.
 
CHANGELOG:
Fixed grammar mistakes.
Went more in depth in descriptions and forms.
Added a bit more to backstory.
 
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Aesthetics to fit better with Brakin character design. Will add more to Ivo's description later.
 
CHANGELOG:
Updated Relationships.
Changed cultural past from Tarkkin to Hjordi
 
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CHANGELOG:
Redid Plothooks, more to be added
Redid relationships.
Added a new section for Ivaldilore. Some hints here and there about his backstory.
Rokenn's will be coming soon.
 

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