Played Character Erwin Braunschweiger

BeetrootSalad · Oct 14, 2019

BeetrootSalad · Oct 22, 2019

Eye color: Green
Hair Color: Dusty Blond
Height: 5'10/178
Weight: 183/83
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➢ 1 | Braunschweiger was first-born to Hermann Braunschweiger and Mathilda Baumann in Büchner, of 287 AC, a pair of cattlekeepers for the local Celerie.
➢ 2 | On his 14th birthday, he received a uniform rather than a cake, marking the first year of his conscription as a Drachenburg feudal levy in accordance to local conscription laws.
➢ 3 | His exemplary services saw him continuing his career in the military as a Tenpenny , and upon his graduation, deploying on a multitude of campaigns which saw him further promoted.
➢ 4 | Eventually, he found himself being summoned to Regalia to serve as a personal guard for the von Drachenburgs rather than just a feudal officer.
➢ 5 | After his stint with the legendary blade Sangria and the work he did in the name of Purism, the Lothar Order extended an invitation to him, where he was enknighted as a Grauwald brother.

Expanded Backstory: (CURRENTLY INACCURATE)
➢ | Childhood
➢ Braunschweiger was first-born to Hermann Braunschweiger and Mathilda Baumann in Büchner, of 287 AC. His younger sister, Elke, was much less timid than he was and often overstepped her boundaries with him. They were close friends despite this, but it led Erwin to take on more submissive, sheepish characteristics for the rest of his life - features that his strictly Wirtem parents were quick to pick up on. When they matured, however, he took on an extremely protective big brother role and after many infant deaths and miscarriages, both had become treasured in the household.

➢ The family served the local Celerie as cattlekeepers and feudal serfs, providing the Unionist convent they lived under with produce and the feudal lords they were born under with soldiers. Despite the childhood dreams of pursuing astronomy and a scholarly path to study the stars, Erwin was never able to follow such a life, attending to the monastery that his family kept cattle for instead; a duty that lay the foundation for a future of religious devotion and seeded him with a perpetual craving for validation, even though he wasn't initially a zealous child. His two saving graces gwere his literacy; gifted by a merciful Sister of Silence who entertained the dreams of a peasant child, and his ability to play the piano; given by one of the Celate's attendants so that the organs for morning service would never go silent.
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➢ | Adolescence
➢ While his life so far had been smooth, the draft loomed distantly ahead. Wehrpflichtgebot lingered in the back of his mind, drawing closer by each passing year. By then, his mother had begun to realize that (despite the irony of it being his name,) Erwin was no friend of war. A first-born is still a first-born, however, he was forced to face conscription regardless. On his 14th birthday, he received a uniform rather than a cake, marking the first year of his enrollment at the local Tenpenny Academy.

➢ Erwin graduated at the age of 16, though it was hardly a happy affair. Just a year prior, his mother had perished - struck down through childbirth complications. Unfortunately, while it was a common form of death, the Braunschweiger couldn't help but consider; if she had not tried for a third son, she would have lived. If he simply conformed to better fit her views, if he simply lived up to the expectations of a Wirtem man and, perhaps, if he were a better first-born and a better son, there would've been no need to 'try again'. Naturally, this was utterly nonsense, but with a dead mother, a grieving father and a rebellious sibling, he saw no purpose to returning home.

➢ He grew intensely ambitious. His focus in life completely shifted directions as he became one with the army in his final year of the academy. Erwin had found appreciation in how easy it was to measure his self-worth - whether it through the easily digestible military hierarchy in place or through his ability to carry out orders and accomplish tasks, ditching his dreams of charting the stars for one of conquest and battle.

➢ In an effort to more closely fetter himself to his culture, Erwin continued his service by working as a noble guard for his regional lord. Maturing into a fine young man, Erwin enlisted with the company of the von Drachenburgs and eventually became a minor field officer.
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➢ | Adulthood
➢ Erwin saw his first conflict in the Hadravian War in 303 AC. As the war approached its end, Erwin was thrown back by the Mage during the Howlester Miracle. The experiences of war strike each individual in its own way, but it strikes nonetheless. Confused, unhinged, and horrified by his firsthand experiences, Erwin began to truly question his position in life and his purpose moving forward.

➢ Nevertheless, he began serving in more battles, returning to Farah'deen for the Second Songaskian War, garrisoning at Hadrian's Wall during the war against the North, and participating in petty border conflicts. With lessons learned and newfound experience, Erwin found himself clawing his way up the ranks until an extraordinary opportunity was afforded to him; attending the Calemberger Ordner Academy to further his careeer. His dedication had distinguished him and even though his peers were noble and the pressure to do well only escalated, he soon graduated, his Fatherland remaining firmly in mind. (All backstory events from this point onwards have been IC events.)

➢ Eventually, peace ended once again and he was sent with Fudail Bashshar and Mila Braunbecker to hold against the Kathar in the final chapters of the Dread War.

➢ After his stint with Sangria and the work he had done in the name of Purism, the Lothar Order invited him to join their ranks and ultimately enknighted him. He has since been promoted to Knight-Major.

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➢ Full Name | Erwin Ferdinand Braunschweiger

➢ Titles | Armaments Commissioner, Violet Guard, Captain of the von Drachenburg House Guard (Hauptmann der Hauswache), Field-Commander under General Hans Nowotny (Feldkommandant der Freikorps Regalia)

➢ Race | Ailor

➢ Culture | Wirtem

➢ Age | 25

➢ Birthday | February 10th, 286 AC

➢ Gender | Male
➢ Sexuality | Humanoid Prayer Beads
➢ Eye Color | Oakmoss
➢ Inventory | Inventory Sheet

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➢ 1 | Braunschweiger is a diehard, stalwart believer of Vierzehn Unionism. Unfortunately (or perhaps fortunately), this faith has been in a cycle between waning and downright zealotry as his time in the city marches on.

➢ 2 | Erwin Braunschweiger is your typical, Wirtem NPC-esque soldier-turned-executioner - one who fights for the three pillars of his life; Fatherland, Family and Fidelity. He struggles with balancing his borderline blind obedience, his Purist beliefs and his personal moral code, which at this point, has been entirely obliterated.

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~~➢ Strength | 7~~

~~➢ Constitution | 4~~

➢ Defensive | Counterplay Pack
➢ Defensive | Second Wind Pack
➢ Defensive | Protectorate Pack
➢ Defensive | Resilience Pack

~~➢ Wisdom | 1~~

~~➢ Tech | Tech Gravity Pack~~

~~➢ Dexterity | 1~~

~~➢ Roguery | Dirty Fighter~~

~~➢ Magic | 0~~

~~➢ THE EVERWATCHER COMMANDS PURITY~~

~~➢ Charisma | 1~~

~~➢ State | Agitator Commander Pack~~

➢ Abilities

➢ Ailor Racials

➢ | Ailor Familiar
➢ | Weapon Throw

➢ Athletic Techniques

➢ | Building Scale
➢ | Steady Body
➢ | Swimming Expert

➢ Defense Techniques

➢ | Rage Counter
➢ | Second Wind
➢ | Interception

➢ Melee Techniques

➢ Wisdom Techniques

~~➢ | Tech Gravity~~

➢ Charisma Techniques

~~➢ | Forced Aggro~~

➢ Coraveau

➢ | Coraveau Vice
➢ | Coraveau Herald
➢ | Coraveau Scales

~~➢ Strength | 2~~

~~➢ Athletic | Warden Pack~~
~~➢ Athletic | Climber Pack~~

~~➢ Constitution | 4~~

➢ Defensive | Counterplay Pack
➢ Defensive | Recovery Pack
➢ Defensive | Protectorate Pack
➢ Defensive | Resilience Pack

~~➢ Wisdom | 1~~

~~➢ Artificer | Medical Pack~~

~~➢ Dexterity | 5~~

~~➢ Magic | 0~~

~~➢ THE EVERWATCHER COMMANDS PURITY~~

~~➢ Charisma | 2~~

~~➢ State | State Commander Pack~~
~~➢ State | Agitator Commander Pack~~

➢ Abilities

➢ Ailor Racials

➢ | Ailor Familiar
➢ | Rugged Pack

➢ Athletic Techniques

➢ | Building Scale
➢ | Steady Body

➢ Defense Techniques

➢ | Rage Counter
➢ | Bonfire
➢ | Interception

➢ Firearm Techniques

➢ Artificer Techniques

~~➢ | Healing Hands~~

➢ Charisma Techniques

➢ | Battle Command
➢ | Forced Aggro

➢ Ritualism

➢ | Ritualistic Manifestation
➢ | Ritualistic Scripture
➢ | Ritualistic Crafting
➢ | Light the Path

➢ Custom Kit

➢ | Tenpenny Switchtek
➢ | Guiding Light

➢ Sangria

➢ Languages

➢ Common
➢ Calem

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➢ 1 | Due to recent (IC) events, the right side of his face is scarred. Gashes run from the side of his scalp to his eye; nicked ears, small blemishes, and minor disfigurements all adorning what was once the face of a 'perfect posterboy'. His right eye was left cloudy and opaque, though it has returned to a degree of functionality. Erwin's throat is equally as scuffed, though these marks are often hidden with a tugged-up collar, and a multitude of symbols have been carved (by others) into his chest, arms and face out of vengeance.
➢ 2 | His eyes are a pale green, though due to recent (and unfortunate) circumstances, they're typically underlined with dark bags. Likewise, his nose is Roman, albeit, unorthodox; tall and slender, tapering off into a hooked point. He wears scuffs of blond hair forced into a neat, straightened cut; no doubt a reflection on his entire posture, a lanky and willowy lean somehow bent into a sense of upright formality. Though he is muscular and his frame is average, he is generally slimmer than he is broad - stance sturdy from his training, despite his build as a supple, longer-limbed person. He is 6'2.

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➢ | Face refs (Order of most to least accurate)
➢ | Art
➢ | Board

➢ | Warren Kole

➢ 1 | His eyes are a pale green, though due to recent (and unfortunate) circumstances, they're typically underlined with dark bags. The lightness of his eyebrows and the gentler slope of his brow ridge give him a fairly mellowed look, while his jawline is sharp and takes a narrower, slim shape. Likewise, his nose is Roman, albeit, unorthodox; tall and slender, tapering off into a hooked point. This, coupled with a clean shave and freckles across his face, gives Erwin the appearance of a polite but tired 'pretty boy'. He wears scuffs of tousled hair forced into a neat, straightened cut; no doubt a reflection on his entire posture, a lanky and willowy lean somehow bent into a sense of upright formality.

➢ 2 | Though he is muscular and his frame is average, he is generally slimmer than he is broad - stance sturdy from his training, despite his build as a supple, longer-limbed person. One could most easily describe the Tenpenny as lanky. Erwin has a variety of old injuries and scars across his body (all gained ICly), spanning from a long stab across his side (Kathar attack), an old scar along his stomach/intestines (targeted assault), healed wounds along his shoulders (Progression wars) and a weakened left arm (Burning of the Beerhall).

➢ 3 | Due to his determination to protect both the von Drachenburg and Wirtem image, he keeps everything on him neat, clean, and organized. Braunschweiger frequently wears several layers, even if they can be restrictive or too hot during the warmer seasons. He typically follows the Waldmann style, a faint reminder of his youth despite the uptight exterior he exerts, as well as a symbol of pride for his origins.

➢ 4 | The Captain speaks with a Hinterwälder accent. It gets slightly stronger when he is intoxicated. His manner of speech is polite, bureaucratic, and he rarely uses profanity (unless under severe distress). However, his professional voice can come off as annoying, repetitive, and bland, akin to a customer service agent reading off a manual. Otherwise, his casual tone can be sheepish and quiet, respectful but emotional and incredibly expressive during times of grief.

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➢ | How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? |

➢ The Wirtem carries himself with sheepish and timid kindness whenever he's praised for even small feats. Whenever he accomplishes something, Erwin frequently grows flustered, putting on a modest, humbled pride to cover up his overwhelming delight. More often than not, simply being happy can break his usually austere demeanor and professional persona. Erwin is ultimately an optimist, a fundamental aspect of him that will never change.

➢ | How would your character respond to experiencing Fear?

➢ The two most well-known responses to fear are flight and fight, but an untouched one is `freeze`. He stiffens up when facing truly terrifying circumstances and it's not hard to tell when he's afraid, even if he tries to hide it. No longer does the soldier hesitate, launching into either diplomatic negotiation or instinctive violence. In terms of the eldritch and the truly horrifying, however, it's easy to slip back into old habits; growing anxious, twitchy, and generally paranoid during moments of both social and physical fear. Shrinking back, gnawing on his tongue, or lashing out in panic are all common responses. Over time, long-term fears and pressures force him into submissiveness and quiet surrender.

➢ | How would your character respond to experiencing Stress?

➢ More often than not, Erwin lets his stress pile upon him, repressing minor incidents for them to only grow over time. Generally, he becomes reclusive and procrastinates on the issue, before the bottle bursts open and he must deal with the aftermath. Erwin often forces himself not to cry or break down in front of others, which has been growing increasingly effective with experience. Ironically, this repression often worsens the situation; bringing about the guilt that comes with the self-awareness of both one's privilege and one's misery. He copes through a multitude of both helpful and self-destructive ways, whether they be prayer and penitence, punishment and discipline, alcohol, walks in the woods, denial or acceptance. One of his greatest stress relievers simply comes in knowing that he's fulfilling his duty and contributing to society.

➢ | How does your character view Law and Authorities?

➢ Braunschweiger spent his life obeying authorities and the law and continues to do so. He holds an incredibly high view of the Regalian Empire and an even higher view of the Duchy of Drachenwald. The Ailor is generally submissive to both official authorities (anybody that ranks above him) and even those that simply assert themselves socially; authority and Fatherland is, after all, is one of the fundamental pillars of Erwin's life and mental wellness, rivaled only by Family and Fidelity (Religion). His self-value is defined by how authoritative figures view him, and he'll often do as much as he can to please them or keep from offending them, holding their mere opinion as law to live by. This had led to some severe issues.

➢ | How does your character feel about Races other than their own?

➢ He takes quite a bit of pride in being a Wirtem Ailor. He sees his race as 'superior' not just by destiny alone, but also as a hardworking people deserving of their glory. It's generally impolite to bring up such topics in conversation, so it's rarely mentioned on his end. As for other races, they often fall short of his respect- some even inducing fear, from the intimidating stature of the Url to the wicked reputations of the Kathar. Though he is expected to hate, he is unable to truly, fundamentally loathe another, choosing instead to force on a false front of disgust and conservatism- a unique flavor of discrimination, but discrimination nonetheless. One of the ways this manifests is the all too familiar hypocrisy of the 'exception/you're not like the others', where individuals of those who are known as 'lesser' prove themselves as extraordinary.

➢ | How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths?

➢ The soldier is a Unionist, influenced by his peers into Purism. Unionism is one of the great pillars that Erwin uses to stay sane and set his self-worth with, the others being Family and Fatherland (Authority). Other faiths tend to invoke a feeling of unease, discomfort, and a pity that their worship goes to nothing, while more Voidist/the Arcane based faiths invoke disgust, fear and ultimately, hatred. His distaste to heretics is more than apparent when he speaks to them, as polite as he tries to be. With this in mind, Erwin follows the Wirtem philosophy of remaining unpretentious with religion- mentioning it only when necessary (in spite of his zealotry), refusing to flaunt his 'purity' and using his Archan abilities only in the most dire of straits.

➢ | How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world?

➢ There's a sense of sheer terror in knowing that a handful of people could hold so much power. Arcane magic is a completely foreign concept to him, one that he could never sympathize with. As much as he tries to respect those around him, mages will never see themselves dignified by him. Furthermore, with the more conservative, Unionist ideals he has been taught, he comes to see the Arcane as a reason to why Regalia suffers from so many magical crises. Trauma from battle mages and sorcerers during wartime have also factored into this intense fear of the aberrant.

➢ | How does your character feel towards their family?

➢ Though they separated once he enlisted, Erwin holds very fond memories of his family. Erwin sincerely loves his family, valuing their opinions on him a tad too highly. Over time, he's gotten over his sister's bullying and taken an extremely protective 'big brother' stance over his sister and sees his father as a great role model and someone he aspires to be. He pens them letters every month, sending any excess money he has to ensure their success and prosperity to make up for not being in Waldmark. Unfortunately, his mother died in childbirth, which he has blamed himself for and aims to repent for on the daily. Otherwise, his family is one of the great pillars that Erwin holds himself up on and defines himself with, alongside Fidelity (Religion) and Fatherland (Authority).

➢ | What is your character the most proud of about themselves?

➢ His accomplishments in the military have brought him incredible pride and he became a decorated field commander. The simple, hierarchical form of military ranks was easy for him to digest as a means of measuring his self-value.
≫ Alongside these achievements were his accomplishments in the academy, quickly becoming known as one of the most dedicated students in his class and working hard to achieve even more. Erwin also takes pride in his education, literacy, culture, and linguistic prowess.

➢ | What motivates your character to move forward and better their life?

➢ The soldier strives to rise above his station and continue achieving in the name of his family and his province. His complete loyalty and belief in the von Drachenburgs is another driving factor, but this includes the fear of disappointing the aforementioned house. The death of his mother and the fact that he blames himself for it is the driving force behind all his military pursuits and his better-mannered nature. It is in a coward's nature to be driven by fear, and the fear of failure is perhaps the greatest of all. Years of indoctrination, propaganda, and the ambitions of naïve dreamers guide Erwin- regardless if his goals are his own or if 'better' is truly beneficial for his own being.

➢ | What is your character's biggest insecurity?

➢ Despite his appearances and mannerisms, Braunschweiger is fairly thin-skinned. When criticized, he takes it to heart, no matter how casual or serious it is. His rank and how well he performs are his methods of self-validation and he relies on them to measure his self-worth. When his mother complained about his lack of ambition and masculinity, and then died attempting to birth another son, he blamed himself for her death and has lived with the weight ever since. Furthermore, a good lot of emotional baggage from unfortunate experiences in Regalia is only worsened by those telling him to simply 'man up' and 'Tapferkeit ohne Wehleidigkeit/suffer without complaint' (Even though he is not a Viridian). He's often criticized for being weak, pathetic and a 'sorry excuse for a person', due to his spinelessness and cowardice, for not standing up and allowing nearly everybody in his life to walk over him or control him in some way. He's been attacked for his religion and for serving in the past, by those who have suffered under his ideology (such as the Velheim in the Burning), as well as for blatant racism and discrimination by the Liberal cliques of the city. This, of course, does not help when Erwin turns around to find the Conservative cliques demeaning him for allowing it to occur at all/not embracing such a title- adding further insult to injury and forcing him into a cycle of self-isolation.

➢ | What is your character's biggest fear?

➢ He fears disappointment from family, friends, and superiors. This ties in poorly with his insecurities, leading to his fear of imperfection, or at least, falling anywhere below average. By allowing those around him to define his fear, their definitions have become it. Due to his mostly conservative Calemberg roots, the association of 'betraying one's traditions' and 'disappointing his loved ones' have led him to fear massive social/political change as well. He fears sin, accidentally making deals with demons or committing heresy, a fear that stems from both his staunchly conservative views and his childhood fairytales and the morals they taught him. Perhaps his greatest fear of all, however, is the responsibility of failure. He is so afraid of failure that he simply does not make his own choices, letting others pilot what should be his life- Family, Fidelity, Fatherland, all just a symptom of his inability to choose.

➢ | Alignment

~~➢ Lawful Good~~
➢ Lawful Neutral as of February 19, 308 AC
➢ Lawful Evil as of May 26th, 308 AC
➢ True Neutral as of September 9th, 308 AC
➢ Neutral Evil as of November 24th, 308 AC | The Tenpenny strives to be Lawful Good, yet due to current events and stresses, he's slowly coming to rely less and less on old oaths and moral obligations. This, coupled with growing radicalization, extremist and mental exhaustion, has finally led him to Neutral Evil.
➢ True Neutral as of March 20th, 310 AC | Peace is never impossible.

➢ | Personality Type

➢ ESFJ | The Consul

➢ | Religion

➢ Vierzehn-Dogmatic Unionism (Formerly Vanilla-Dogmatic) | 10/10

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➢ | Machiavellian

≫ As time passes, Erwin finds himself growing more and more morally fallible. Ultimately, the ends justify the means- some 'means' more brutal than others. He is extremely susceptible to pressure from authority and those he deems respectable- easily falling to their whims so long as they can convince him that it is the 'right thing to do', which, in itself, is not a hard task. After all, authority is one of the fundamental pillars of Erwin's life and mental wellness, to the point where his self-value is defined by how authority figures view him. A poster-child to totalitarians, obedience defines Erwin. After all, he was only following orders... Right?

➢ | Stringent

≫ Perhaps one of the most highly strung people one could meet, few can match how obsessively meticulous Erwin is. While he maintains realistic practicality in his actions, calling him 'strict' in his already black-and-white philosophy would be an understatement, and while he is firm and rigidly austere in nearly every aspect of life, this does nothing to take away from his 'push-over' nature; his convictions inherently hypocritical. After all, how can one be principled and firm yet allow any basic form of authority to sway and control them? A hollow boot-licker, through and through.

➢ | Acrimonious

≫ After months of constant bullying from peers, assaults on both his physical and mental state and general stress, Erwin simply cannot take it anymore. Through a perfect combination of bad influences, the death of those mentally supporting him (such as the Weismanns'), scapegoating, and being pushed in the wrong direction, the city has filled his heart with hate, spite, and discrimination. With the discovery of heretical views on the Planes, political secrets, and the shattering of his ideology, the Tenpenny has retreated further into Purism and Wirtem Rationalism (despite his complete and utter inability to quell his emotions). He still maintains an optimistic, merciful view on the world, though that itself is swiftly waning and the initial polite kindness the boy held has been locked away.

➢ | Cowardly

≫ To be easily intimidated by authority, as well as his peers, is often a great weakness. Tied in with his stringency and gullibility, he embodies the perfect recipe for a pushover, solely dependent on what those above him order him to do and sticking to the orthodox. With the recent events in the city and recent betrayals from "supposed friends", Erwin has grown even more paranoid. His reaction to fear being 'freeze' only makes this worse, as during times of panic, he can forget that he has the ability to defend himself and simply submits to whatever is causing him grief.

➢ | Gullible

≫ Erwin is incredibly naïve. This plays into his absolute respect for the government and his allegiances, knowing that they rarely do wrong, despite historical incidents that suggest otherwise. Adding on to this, he has a very naïve, black-and-white view of 'us vs them'/good and evil, which has led to a closed-minded approach on many issues. On the other hand, something as simple as a white lie by a figure of authority or anyone respectable becomes a stone-set fact, one that only changes with irrefutable evidence. He is extremely susceptible to pressure from authority and those he deems respectable- easily falling to their whims so long as they can convince him that it is the 'right thing to do', which, in itself, is not a hard task. A poster-child to totalitarians and the virtuous alike, obedience defines Erwin.

➢ | Spineless

≫ He is solely dependent on what those above him order him to do and thus sticks to the easy and the orthodox. Major decision making is a true struggle and his lack of good advisers and role models in his life have left him with this issue. He is seen as soft, backs down easily and is extremely susceptible to pressure from authority, peers and even strangers. He can't make up his mind on a multitude of issues, simply agreeing with whatever anybody in the room is saying (with some exceptions, such as blaspheming Unionism) or changing himself, his views and his mannerisms to please those he respects more.

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➢ | Iron-Willed

≫ Often called hound-like for how strongly he keeps to his ambitions, Erwin is inhumanly determined. Months of despair in the city have made him capable of putting up with extreme amounts of torture, mental anguish and suffering, ultimately granting him an undying resolution to continue on. Unfortunately, with the growing immorality in his action, his justifications have fallen; 'we've gone too far to go back', 'it was them or me' and 'means to an end' all incredibly common. Wild gambles, high risks and even higher stakes; he plays to win. Unafraid to sacrifice anything to achieve his goals or protect those who matter, Erwin's old anxiety has been brushed away- replaced with cut-throat ambition. It's ironic that an Archan of all people, would end becoming the most hellbent of them all.

➢ | Diplomatic

≫ As ironic as it is to be nonviolent as a soldier, Erwin prefers forbearing approaches. While he will not hesitate to carry out orders or defend himself in dire straits, he understands that nobody wants to invoke needless suffering and that simply talking things out can diffuse situations. ~~He refuses to use violence as an outlet to his anger, instead viewing it as a necessity saved only for circumstances that are worthy (justifiable war, self-defense, protection of others, etc.)~~ Easily forgiving and willing to compromise, his understanding and merciful nature ties in directly with his innate desire to do good; turning Erwin into living proof that optimism is not always a flaw.

➢ | Modest

≫ While he is a social butterfly, it's due to his humility rather than his charm. He's quick to apologize, and while it may seem to some that he allows others to walk over him or that he's merely innately sheepish, it's only a result of his unpretentious nature- allowing him to work well with others, despite his weaknesses. Humbled through life-experiences and in personal nature, his own virtues don't distract him from a genuine goal to contribute to society. While Erwin can be materialistic and impractical in regards of money, legality, and militarism, he's generally apathetic to the more superficial aspects of life, brushing aside contests of 'macho-manliness' or toxic levels of hedonism in lieu of what actually matters to him, his livelihood, his patriotism, his family and his ethical code - though whether or not he is too insecure to cause a fuss or simply self-assured enough to remain indifferent is another story.

~~➢ | Upstanding~~

≫ Braunschweiger is undyingly loyal, true to his word, and true to his promise. The Tenppeny does all in his power to keep to his oaths, seldom one to betray or deceive; made reliable and dependable both in nature and from years of training and teambuilding. While this staunch focus on honor and ethics can go as far as becoming a fault- even locking him out of situations and relationships, it goes to show how integral his moral code is. There is, however, a distinction between trying to do the right thing and actually doing the right thing- principles can be manipulated and warped, and authorities can be corrupted. Erwin is no exception.

~~Lately, this has been fading. Rapidly.~~

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『 Shortened Timeline 』

➢ 1 | Braunschweiger was first-born to Hermann Braunschweiger and Mathilda Baumann in Büchner, of 286 AC, a pair of cattlekeepers for the local Celerie.
➢ 2 | On his 14th birthday, he received a uniform rather than a cake, marking the first year of his enrollment at the local Tenpenny Academy in accordance to local conscription laws.
➢ 3 | His exemplary services saw him attending a Calemberger military academy, and upon graduation, he swore his oath to his liege lord von Drachenburg and deployed on a multitude of campaigns.
➢ 4 | Eventually, he found himself being summoned to Regalia to serve as a personal guard for the von Drachenburgs rather than just a feudal officer.
➢ 5 | After his stint with the legendary blade Sangria and the work he did in the name of Purism, the Lothar Order extended an invitation to him, where he was knighted as a Grauwald brother.

➢ | Childhood

➢ Braunschweiger was first-born to Hermann Braunschweiger and Mathilda Baumann in Büchner, of 286 AC. His younger sister, Elke, was much less timid than he was and often overstepped her boundaries with him. They were close friends despite this, but it led Erwin to take on more submissive, sheepish characteristics for the rest of his life - features that his strictly Wirtem parents were quick to pick up on. When they matured, however, he took on an extremely protective big brother role and after many infant deaths and miscarriages, both had become treasured in the household.

➢ The family served the local Celerie as cattlekeepers and feudal serfs, providing the Unionist convent they lived under with produce and the feudal lords they were born under with soldiers. Despite the childhood dreams of pursuing astronomy and a scholarly path to study the stars, Erwin was never able to follow such a life, attending to the monastery that his family kept cattle for instead; a duty that lay the foundation for a future of religious devotion and seeded him with a perpetual craving for validation, even though he wasn't initially a zealous child. His two saving graces gwere his literacy; gifted by a merciful Sister of Silence who entertained the dreams of a peasant child, and his ability to play the piano; given by one of the Celate's attendants so that the organs for morning service would never go silent.

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➢ | Adolescence

➢ While his life so far had been smooth, the draft loomed distantly ahead. Wehrpflichtgebot lingered in the back of his mind, drawing closer by each passing year. By then, his mother had begun to realize that (despite the irony of it being his name,) Erwin was no friend of war. A first-born is still a first-born, however, he was forced to face conscription regardless. On his 14th birthday, he received a uniform rather than a cake, marking the first year of his enrollment at the local Tenpenny Academy.

➢ Erwin graduated at the age of 16, though it was hardly a happy affair. Just a year prior, his mother had perished - struck down through childbirth complications. Unfortunately, while it was a common form of death, the Braunschweiger couldn't help but consider; if she had not tried for a third son, she would have lived. If he simply conformed to better fit her views, if he simply lived up to the expectations of a Wirtem man and, perhaps, if he were a better first-born and a better son, there would've been no need to 'try again'. Naturally, this was utterly nonsense, but with a dead mother, a grieving father and a rebellious sibling, he saw no purpose to returning home.

➢ He grew intensely ambitious. His focus in life completely shifted directions as he became one with the army in his final year of the academy. Erwin had found appreciation in how easy it was to measure his self-worth - whether it through the easily digestible military hierarchy in place or through his ability to carry out orders and accomplish tasks, ditching his dreams of charting the stars for one of conquest and battle.

➢ In an effort to more closely fetter himself to his culture, Erwin continued his service by working as a noble guard for his regional lord. Maturing into a fine young man, Erwin enlisted with the company of the von Drachenburgs and eventually became a minor field officer.

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➢ | Adulthood

➢ Erwin saw his first conflict in the Hadravian War in 303 AC. As the war approached its end, Erwin was thrown back by the Mage during the Howlester Miracle. The experiences of war strike each individual in its own way, but it strikes nonetheless. Confused, unhinged, and horrified by his firsthand experiences, Erwin began to truly question his position in life and his purpose moving forward.

➢ Nevertheless, he began serving in more battles, returning to Farah'deen for the Second Songaskian War, garrisoning at Hadrian's Wall during the war against the North, and participating in petty border conflicts. With lessons learned and newfound experience, Erwin found himself clawing his way up the ranks until an extraordinary opportunity was afforded to him; attending the Calemberger Ordner Academy to further his careeer. His dedication had distinguished him and even though his peers were noble and the pressure to do well only escalated, he soon graduated, his Fatherland remaining firmly in mind. (All backstory events from this point onwards have been IC events.)

➢ Eventually, peace ended once again and he was sent with Fudail Bashshar and Mila Braunbecker to hold against the Kathar in the final chapters of the Dread War.

➢ After his stint with Sangria and the work he had done in the name of Purism, the Lothar Order invited him to join their ranks and ultimately enknighted him. He has since been promoted to Knight-Major.

➢ It was at this age that Erwin began to question himself, his mental state ebbing under the pressure of strict Wirtem customs, confrontations with his militant past, and radicalization alike. Revelations were beginning to take place, spurred on by a variety of characters; Milena Cadieux, Audric Kraus, Axel Weismann, Susan Burch, Khurgah Diakite, Michel Huron, Karsten Typhonus, Isidoro Playero, Nym'vrae Helvath, Sae'viir Tordove, Hans Nowotny, Mila Braunbecker, the Lomstedt brothers and the von Drachenburgs amongst others.

➢ Old influences from Sanchellist school reappeared and Erwin turned to Unionism to cope - dormant fervor awakening. With scripture memorized and relief (even if little) found, the seeds had grown and Fidelity finally began to flourish.

➢ As of now, Erwin is the city's Armaments Commissioner, the Violet Executioner, the Captain of the von Drachenburg House Guard and a Field-Commander under General Hans Nowotny, though only time can tell where he goes next. ~~Erwin has currently been fired or outright deserted all of his jobs and remains unemployed, squatting in a shack in Crookback to repent under an Oath of Poverty. This has not been going well.~~

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➢ | Dietrich von Drachenburg (@FireFan96) (10/10)

➢ Of course, my Liege. I swear my blade, faith and life to you.

➢ | Harald von Drachenburg (@Wumpatron) (9/10)

➢ A father to his men. I'm happy to consider myself as one of his.

➢ | Eldrich von Drachenburg (@FireFan96) (8/10)

➢ You have quite the boots to fill. I hope they fit.

➢ | Hermann Braunschweiger (@BeetrootSalad) (2/10)

➢ I used to look up to you, harlot.

➢ | Jonathan Braunschweiger (@LeonIsLame) (4/10)

➢ It is cruel of me to blame you, but that doesn't stop you from being the dishonor of our family.

➢ | Claiomh MacDrocharmadh (@Antimreoir) (10/10)

➢ All that I've done would be for nothing if you followed in my steps.

➢ | Hans Nowotny (@_K_Galland_) (8/10)

➢ Even I'm not that genocidal, but hey - you do you.

➢ | Mila Braunbecker (@Arcanus01134) (9/10)

➢ The Ducal-Protector's best Ducal-Protection.

➢ | Lupin Lomstedt (@LeonIsLame) (8/10)

➢ I'm sorry for what I've turned you into.

➢ | Peter Ziegler (@Audianna) (6/10)

➢ You're okay, kid.

➢ | Winifred Marth (@AtticCat (8/10)

➢ Stop trying to marry me, witch.

➢ | Lynmar Lomstedt (@Simslp) (1/10)

➢ You have some strange hobbies. I hope they remain as just that.

➢ | Lothar Lomstedt (@FutureTeller) (5/10)

➢ Stay in with the right crowd. Learn to lift a little, too.

➢ | Rudolf Adler (@OliverOnly (7/10)

➢ Remind me where you got those shades. They're quite stylish.

➢ | Otto Bergmann (@Infinatum) (7/10)

➢ I wish I could follow orders as well as you do.

➢ | Cecille Howlester (@Messtro) (7/10)

➢ Perhaps my views on the Griffers were wrong.

➢ | Theresia Kaeppler (@FeralGayWalnut) (8/10)

➢ A brilliant, albeit terrifying, woman.

➢ | Axel Weismann (@MrBlwe) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (8/10)

➢ How can you learn what's never shown?

➢ | Franz Knispel (@bardnotinatavern) (7/10)

➢ You are both the most amusing and frightening person I have ever met.

➢ | Fulgore Fänger (@SomeRandomMan) (6/10)

➢ A wretched oathbreaker but a fellow hunter. I salute you.

➢ | Reimar of Calemberg (@ChapterDeath) (8/10)

➢ Men like you and I are born and bred to die.

➢ | Audric Kraus (@GrilledCheese2) (-3/10)

➢ You treated me like a dog and forgot I had teeth.

➢ | Hugo Krieger (@Timetotalk) (7/10)

➢ Stay safe, soldier.

➢ | Howland von Schwarzkrau (@Hemingway7) (8/10)

➢ Carrying the torch of our people is no easy task.

➢ | Katrin Latimer (@AWildRhia) (6/10)

➢ You bewilder me.

➢ | Lukas Jones (@Chrothic) (-2/10)

➢ The song of our homeland is one you do not deserve to sing.

➢ | Alaric Keen (@HeyitsNano) (-1/10)

➢ A manic dog on Kreiburg's broken leash.

➢ | Murielle Barkhardt (@Maeovika) (0/10)

➢ You aren't much better.

➢ | Karsten Typhonus (@Lly2) (9/10)

➢ I miss you.

➢ | Reginald von Falkenreich (@nath_n) (6/10)

➢ No hard feelings.

➢ | Terrowin Steeljack (@KonaKitsune) (7/10)

➢ Best of luck with the future.

➢ | Alfred Wulfmacht (@MrBlwe) (5/10)

➢ A burden we both share. For the Fatherland.

➢ | Wilhelm Wulfmacht (@kdeeks) (4/10)

➢ I'd like to know you.

➢ | Thomas Weismann (@kdeeks) (6/10)

➢ The old days aren't going to return, are they.

➢ | Marie Weismann (@happygalli) (-3/10)

➢ Rot in Ithania.

➢ | Sascha Blauküst (@sadgalli) (5/10)

➢ You could've told me.

➢ | Gabrielle von Falkenreich (@HeyItzAPotato (4/10)

➢ Get well soon. Stick to the light.

➢ | Karsten Handelsbinder (@Zombiel3ait) (7/10)

➢ Bottoms up, Professor.

➢ | Ulric Typhonus (@TyrolleanEagle) (8/10)

➢ An idol I've never met.

➢ | Olivann Weismann (@Audianna) (4/10)

➢ See a therapist.

➢ | Alexis Morgan (@KKisname) (4/10)

➢ Thank you for protecting me.

➢ | Viggo Sorenvik (@SupremeCripple) (9/10)

➢ On your order.

➢ | Sivrid Sorenvik (@MrsCripple) (6/10)

➢ A Pagan and a Heretic, but I can get over that.

➢ | Kaya Sorenvik (@AlphaInsomnia) (6/10)

➢ Intimidating.

➢ | Taeron Kassambara (@HeyItzAPotato) (8/10)

➢ From the second that I was born, it seems I've had a loaded gun.

➢ | Tryphona Aduro (@Tsar_Maple) (8/10)

➢ Don't make me your punching bag.

➢ | Sibyllad Lykke (@Sujitation) (7/10)

➢ Never make me deadlift you again.

➢ | Isobel Lykke (@FrostedDewDrop) (7/10)

➢ It's one thing to torture me, it's another to enjoy it.

➢ | Ariquis (@Aurelian30k) (4/10)

➢ My ear still hurts. I think I have an infection.

➢ | Aldüir Stormblade (@AshenRoman) (6/10)

➢ In the light we walk.

➢ | Ewan Howlester (@Battlebrawn) (5/10)

➢ Stay safe out there.

➢ | Asdis Osplund (@MantaRey) (5/10)

➢ I can't wait to talk again.

➢ | Juane Anenih (@Dudonka2) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (6/10)

➢ Rest in peace.

➢ | Calibur Ashford (@DuchBargollo) (5/10)

➢ Drop and give me twenty.

➢ | Atwood Nak (@NaktheGayGinger) (5/10)

➢ Is your hair natural?

➢ | Torhilde (@Scafspair) (6/10)

➢ I owe you a few.

➢ | Celeste Venphine (@TheHitchHyker) (5/10)

➢ Try to clean yourself up, once in a while. I rarely see medics so bloody.

➢ | Lyall Howlester (@ShipIt) (5/10)

➢ Sleep is a luxury that I cannot afford.

➢ | Zzalangua Ssizzlir (@PapidaCarrot) (4/10)

➢ Let me know what I can do for you.

➢ | Eerikur Fjordefil (@TheRook1) (5/10)

➢ Eyes up, Violet. We have work to do.

➢ | Ealireleia Carbellenor (@Yoggery) (4/10)

➢ I'll never know why they let a Kathar in.

➢ | Mother Alexi (@LeafMC) (0/10)

➢ I know where I'm going.

➢ | Wilvamair Arnyn (@Winterless) (7/10)

➢ Our fates have diverged and yet we remain brothers.

➢ | Milena Cadieux de Lierre (@canaaa) (4/10)

➢ You've gone far.

➢ | Humaira Reinard (@Aurelian30k) (6/10)

➢ May the dead play jury to our perfect crimes.

➢ | Cecil (@sonofthestars) (-10/10)

➢ You ruined my life.

➢ | Eloi de Gonzo (@Wilvahelm) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (-7/10)

➢ Things never change.

➢ | Qalhata Dzehk'aar (@Yurs) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (-2/10)

➢ It's finally over. You say would've done the same, and yet, you didn't.

➢ | Xeniya Wyrann (@SaltyLikeTheSea) (-6/10)

➢ Some people never change. That is what execution is for.

➢ | Milo Shinseki (@Plt_Hasagi) (-6/10)

➢ You are a race traitor of the worst degree.

➢ | Xilthruum the Lich (@Magivore) (-6/10)

➢ All these questions and answers that only create more.

➢ | Susan Burch (@Sozzer) (6/10)

➢ Forgive me for my sins.

➢ | Felix (@BeetrootSalad) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (3/10)

➢ You scream to the Everwatcher and yet you are faithless.

➢ | Isidoro Playero (@Mad_Gadfly) (Deceased, condemned by Erwin) (-2/10)

➢ Berets soaked in blood.

➢ | Mariona de Gonzo (@HeyItzAPotato) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (0/10)

➢ Only nineteen. What was it for?

➢ | Reselda de Gonzo (@Berternie) (1/10)

➢ I can't blame you for hating me.

➢ | Simone Playero (@sinhai) (1/10)

➢ No amount of apologies will be enough.

➢ | Irel (@microwavemmm) (-7/10)

➢ Death is a cruel mistress. You are worse.

➢ | Fe'Roris (@SanguinePacman) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (-4/10)

➢ Can you truly say your intent is noble?

➢ | Nym'vrae Helvath (@Katiesc) (Deceased) (9/10)

➢ You were supposed to outlive me.

➢ | Fortissimo (@Yurs) (-9/10)

➢ This is all your fault.

➢ | Keavy (@Cunoesse) (1/10)

➢ Well-intentioned, I suppose. Stay safe and stop hanging out with bloody Jacobins.

➢ | Sae'viir Drulvaar (@SorryNari) (5/10)

➢ You blinded one eye but opened another.

➢ | Mirabella Wymarc (@Acosmism) (0/10)

➢ I haven't forgotten your sins.

➢ | Cagan Kassambara (@hongkongmadaviet) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (2/10)

➢ Your family misses you. I can't say I feel the same.

➢ | Nightingale (@sensiblegh0st) (-3/10)

➢ A petty thief and nothing more.

➢ | Aridai Darietheck (@sensiblegh0st) (Deceased, killed by Erwin) (1/10)

➢ My orders were fulfilled. My guilt is yours.

➢ | Alexei Reznofinid (@MippyMoo) (-2/10)

➢ You never knew anything.

➢ | Khurgah Diakite (@MippyMoo) (2/10)

➢ My religion is mine, yours is yours. Keep it that way.

➢ | Alton Rider (@akusazero) (1/10)

➢ Please get help.

➢ | Valarosta Ino-Femunn (@Athelois) (0/10)

➢ Terrifying.

➢ | Ana Cervantez (@soggytoenails) (-2/10)

➢ An angel of death. At least we have that in common.

➢ | Maelstrom Keppkuula (@Lumiess) (1/10)

➢ Brutal, bloody and barbaric.

➢ | Anathema (@Birdsfoot_Violet) (0/10)

➢ Something is strange about you.

➢ | Kabili Drulvaar (@HereticTakao) (-1/10)

➢ I thought you were one of the good ones.

➢ | Oldritch (@Deusphage) (-8/10)

➢ Mad men wept and sane men went mad.

➢ | Beatrix (@Qoll) (-2/10)

➢ You were a fun catch.

➢ | Harlow Ketch (@fantuinn) (5/10)

➢ I don't envy your job, either.

➢ | Quin (@TheBearistotle) (2/10)

➢ The light you cast upon me was empty. We're back where we started.

➢ | Rhys Sivo (@DogVibes) (-4/10)

➢ Cast not stones from your glass palace.

➢ | Morningstar (@sonofthestars) (Deceased) (-9/10)

➢ I'll see you in Hell.

➢ | Nicodemus (@sonofthestars) (-6/10)

➢ Blood, iron, honor and steel. It isn't fair.

➢ | Louise von Manteflu (@_K_Galland_) (-2/10)

➢ Please stop breaking into my house.

➢ | Annya (@nath_n) (2/10)

➢ I cut out your tongue and yet, you still manage to say the wrong things.

➢ | Felsin Kretch (@FirelightMLPOC) (-3/10)

➢ As mad as his son.

➢ | Naeem Kajji Vazirani (@NZ_Nix) (4/10)

➢ Your words have not fallen on deaf ears.

Messtro · Oct 22, 2019

Looking good, your app is now APPROVED!
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Feb 18, 2020

@Nesstro
Hi! I needed to update my sheet, all updates are made in Green.
- Updated life story
- Elaborated on a few personality traits
- Fixed some minor inconsistencies about his family
- Changed his proficiency points a bit to better match his character

Thank you!

Messtro · Feb 18, 2020

Looks good but you also have 10 hobby points to use towards anything in the arts prof category!
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Feb 18, 2020

Done! Could you mark it as approved once more? @Nesstro

Messtro · Feb 18, 2020

There ya go!
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Feb 20, 2020

@Nesstro Final edit for a while, thanks once again! Marked in Green, I'll turn it all black right before it gets the correct flair.

Messtro · Feb 21, 2020

Everything looks good! Feel free to change it to back to normal if you'd like.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Feb 21, 2020

@Nesstro
Has anyone ever pointed out how nice you look tonight ~~please don't kill me~~
- Edits in Green, just fixed somethings and made wording vaguer so I don't need to update frequently, again, apologies as this is sort of a development phase for him

Messtro · Feb 21, 2020

Approved.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Feb 29, 2020

@Nesstro Tiny edits, his birthday passed a few days ago and fixed the lore compliance-y of his schooling. Edits made in green.

Messtro · Feb 29, 2020

Approved.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Mar 2, 2020

@Nesstro
- Massive formatting overhaul
- Realized I was severely downplaying his racism/Unionist Ailor supremacy, marked in Blue
- Slight aesthetic changes, marked in Blue
- 'Orthodoxy/Lack of Creativity/Boring' as a weakness was super restrictive roleplay wise, changed the Weakness to 'Cowardly and Paranoid', marked in Blue

Thank you!

Messtro · Mar 3, 2020

Approved.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Mar 15, 2020

@Nesstro
Rearranged his proficiency points without changing any of the proficiencies, feel free to take a look.
(Not sure how large a change must be to warrant a re-eval, by the way, so let me know if this doesn't.)

BeetrootSalad · Mar 18, 2020

@Nesstro Heard that you needed to tag if you added a new proficiency, added Shielding Combat Skill in blue.

Edit: While I was waiting, I figured I'd update little tidbits and grammar mistakes, all also in Blue.

Messtro · Mar 20, 2020

Approved. Sorry for the delay!
@BeetrootSalad

KK134 · Mar 21, 2020

"A bit of a dumpster fire."

BeetrootSalad · Mar 21, 2020

KK134 said:
"A bit of a dumpster fire."

istg

leichendame · Mar 22, 2020

lmao stupid ass animal stabbing himself

BeetrootSalad · Mar 27, 2020

@Nesstro
Changes made in BLUE!
- Fleshed out his character personality more
- Adjusted his life story to explain his Sanktist proficiencies
- Updated his character traits to better reflect how I've been roleplaying / the current situation / his current development

Messtro · Mar 28, 2020

Approved.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Apr 25, 2020

@Nesstro All changes in Blue!
- Changed his 'thematic'/his major weapon from a sword to a halberd to better reflect historically accurate medieval combat as well as his duties as a soldier and a guard.
- Changed proficiency set-up to better match this change.
- No backstory changes needed, since Tenpenny has a halberd contingency.

Thank you! This will be the last major change in a while.

Messtro · Apr 25, 2020

@BeetrootSalad
Approved.

BeetrootSalad · May 26, 2020

Requesting Re-Review
@Nesstro
Changes Made in Blue (Note: All these changes have occurred IC):
- Shifted two proficiency points to Culinary Arts due to time spent around a beer brewing House. He himself cannot brew beer, but is generally better than most in identifying specific tastes and brands.
- Recent developments have dropped his Unionism score from an 8 to a 7
- Recent developments have led to him dropping from Lawful Neutral to Lawful Evil
- Recent developments have turned his original weakness (Spineless and Indecisive/Sheep-like Mentality) to Bitter and Acrimonious. It is further touched upon in the paragraph itself.

Messtro · May 27, 2020

Approved.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Jun 24, 2020

@Nesstro
Changes made in Blue:
- Updated proficiencies to match the Ailor lore overhaul
- Added lineage and sorcery kit
- Fixed a multitude of inconsistencies, grammar issues and minor details that ended up retconned/unplayed in the backstory
- Removed all mentions of the Puretek/Impure Arc that would have been impossible with the latest update (now that Sanktism no longer exists and Archans can use Puretek)
- Tiny historical errors (mixing up Calemberg and Waldmark, issues with some minor wars, etc) in Basic Info fixed
- Goals, current titles and current place in life all updated based on recent IRP events

Messtro · Jun 25, 2020

Approved.
@BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Jul 19, 2020

@Nesstro
Angst Dumptruck Incoming (Blue):
- Dropped him from 29 to 26. Proficiencies points adjusted accordingly.
- Realized my Physical Stat was straight-up wrong, so fixed that too.
- Backstory hotfixes, minor fact-checking/lore-compliancy fixes.
~~- Apparently you need to be at least 14 to join Seminary School- that's been fixed.~~
- Nope, 10 is the min age. Fixed once more.
- Figured that I might as well freshen up the rest of the application, updated Personality section and gave the Expansions a facelift/buff-up.
- Grammar is pain. Grammar is life. Grammar is fixed.

~~...haha remember when he was a wholesome areligious happy fellow i don't~~

Caelamus · Jul 24, 2020

Approved @BeetrootSalad

BeetrootSalad · Jul 24, 2020

Caelamus said:
Approved @BeetrootSalad

Just to confirm, who should I ping the next time I edit?

Caelamus · Jul 24, 2020

BeetrootSalad said:
Just to confirm, who should I ping the next time I edit?

Continue to ping Ness.

BeetrootSalad · Jul 31, 2020

@Nesstro
Made an aesthetic change (no review needed), but it took off my tag. Could you do me a biggie and add it back? Thank you!

BeetrootSalad · Sep 11, 2020

9/11/2020 Update - @Nesstro
- All updates made in blue.
- Grammar fixes
- Shifted Hobby Points to reflect IC roleplay. (the only nice part about this update tbh)
- Updated 'Stress' and 'Fear' responses.
- Added visual/aesthetic scars, temporary maims and various weaknesses/injuries to Visual Expansion. (screaming)
- Erwin's ICly changed from ESFJ to ESTJ.
- Erwin's ICly changed from Lawful Evil to True Neutral.
- Due to IC events, his weaknesses have changed from Cowardly & Paranoid to Machiavellian & Morally Fallible.
- Due to IC events, his weaknesses have changed from Gullible & Naive to Stringent & Obsequious.
- Due to IC events, his Strengths have changed from Principled & Stalwart to Staunch & Committed. (i swear to god i'm not doing erwin smith larp)

... Good luck, Cecille.

Messtro · Sep 11, 2020

..Ohmygod
Approved.

BeetrootSalad · Sep 17, 2020

9/17/2020 Proficiency Update - @Nesstro
- All updates made in blue.
- Union Blessings buffed up to 12.
- Added Blessings of the Chastised and Blessings of the Waywatcher.
- Changed Pole to Glaive Combat, buffed up to 12.
- Changed Fast-Blades into Sword Combat, buffed up to 10. (Racial Boost)
- Physical Stat recalculated to 22 (previous: 10).
- Changed Field-Command to Frontline-Command, lowered to 8.
- Added Siege-Command.
- Added Pathfinding Arts.
- Changed Musical Arts to Horticulture Arts.

good luck chief o7 praying for lore staff rn

Messtro · Sep 17, 2020

Approved.

BeetrootSalad · Sep 17, 2020

@Nesstro i'm so sorry but arcanus and firefan pointed out that i fucked up talent vs core points so i made a hotfix, changes made are

- diverted two core points from glaive combat to frontline command tactics

that's the only change, i wanted to check in anyways since it's prog points

Messtro · Sep 17, 2020

Approved again goblin man.

Played Character Erwin Braunschweiger

the gremlin

the gremlin

Attachments

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

the gremlin

Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

the gremlin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

the gremlin

Flower Goblin

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