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Played Character Dante T. Tremaux

This character is actively played.
diCardinale

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Location
Sicilian countryside
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"The Everwatch soars above you, displaying to you its eternal glories, and still your eyes are upon the ground."

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"I do not go in search of poetry. I wait for poetry to visit me."

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✤ Full Name: Dante Josep-Maria "Danny" de Sallevier-Tyrannian.
  • Aliases: Lukaas Vanderkant, Maissimen Digne, Dirk Ruijters.​
  • Current Identity: Dante Tremaux.​
✤ Race: Ailor Ithanian (Tolonne)-Anglian.
✤ Age: Twenty-five.
✤ Sex: Male.
✤ Gender: Cisgender.
✤ Sexuality: Truly only the most persuasive and sensual of philosophies & poetry.
✤ Eye Color: Dark pastel blue.
✤ Occult: Unionist God Magic.
✤ Core Concept: Dante is a Tolonne Viridian Lancyon Knight steeped in the teachings of the bygone Dogartan Unionists, hoping to 'fix' the Empire by restoring it to a simpler time free of vices and corruption.

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"It's even more of a torture not to work, than to work."

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✤ Total Points: 14
  • Strength: 7
    • Melee (4)
      • Weapon Throw (Free with Point Buy)
      • Technique Parry
      • Concussive Blow
      • Chaining Throw
      • Tangle Strike
    • Training (3)
      • Interception
      • Breather
      • Iron Will
  • Intelligence:
  • Wisdom:
  • Dexterity: 7
    • Ritualist (7)
      • Stance Ability (Free with Point Buy)
      • Slaughter
      • Hunt
      • Roots
      • Mirage
      • Gale
      • Surge
      • Expulsion
  • Magic:
  • Charisma:
✤ Languages
  • Common​
  • Altalar​
  • Anglisch​
  • Lëtz​
  • d'Ithanie
  • Calem
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"A beautiful body perishes, but a work of art dies not."

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✤ Appearance
  • Dante has no physical abnormalities or Mutations.​
  • Dante is a six-foot-two man, fairly well built with messy hair somewhat combed back, dark pastel blue eyes, light complexion. He is either dressed in a grey-brown tunic, a black leather vest that stops at his upper torso, black trousers that start below his cummerbund, a red-gold cummerbund, red-black bracers, rust-colored socks, and brown boots, or a set of standard issue Viridian armor that is worn but well loved and maintained.​
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"I would much rather have men ask why I have no statue than why I have one."

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WIP
 
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Updates:
  • October 10th, 2019
    • Posted initial application.
  • October 31st, 2019
    • Updated life story and relevant points.
  • April 8th, 2020 (3:52 AM PST))
    • Reworked the entire application.
    • He is now a Villiers-Eclaire Knight alongside having graduated as a General.
    • Redid application aesthetics.
    • Reflected backstory updates with proficiency point updates.
  • April 8th, 2020 (1:37 PM PST)
    • Minor grammar, spelling, and formatting tweaks.
  • April 30th, 2021 (8:53 PM PST)
    • Updated to current Proficiency rework, modified backstory to accommodate the rework, and adjusted why he returned to Regalia.
    • Added having attended a Sancellist College to receive ordainment as a Sancellist Curate, as well as the Door-Inner Huis College to become a decent orator and preacher.
  • October 28th, 2021 (8:23 PST)
    • The three required Proficiency points for attending his approved schools were never added to his proficiencies, so that was amended.
    • Updated outdated terminology stemming from the Unionist update.
    • Changed his mothers last name and tweaked his reason to return to the city.
    • Goes by his mothers last name now.
  • January 4th, 2022 (12:24 PST)
    • Redid Proficiencies.
    • Updated Format to current standard.
    • Reworked backstory to only have attended the Villiers-Eclaire school, and modified his later life.
  • October 12th, 2022 (4:48 CST)
    • Updated Proficiencies to the current system.
    • Adjusted his culture from Anglian-Tolonne to Anglian-Ithanian (Tolonne).
    • Switched from the old two-sentence Core Concept format to the current format.
    • Added an expansion of his beliefs and some backstory Proficiency explanations in this color.
  • November 23rd, 2022 (7:30 CST)
    • Removed Hotiere pack and three points from Wisdom.
    • Added one point to Strength and took the Warrior pack.
    • Added one point to Constitution and took the Protectorate pack.
    • Added one point to Charisma and took the Trampling pack.
    • Added and removed all respective abilities gained & lost.
  • December 6th, 2022 (10:07 CST)
    • Removed State Dignitary pack and replaced with Diplomat pack in light of the Society/Scholar rework.
  • December 25th, 2022 (5:20 CST)
    • Updated application to have his mother of the Tremaux family.
  • July 12th, 2023 (6:52 CST)
    • Updated to current Proficiency rework, switched to a mixed Paladin and Bruiser build.
  • October 9th, 2024 (2:38 AM CST)
    • Switched to a Bruiser-Cleric build
    • Adjusted Free Packs derived from Ailor Heritage Traits
    • Removed old backstory to later update with Life Hooks format
 
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Hello! I'm claiming this application for review! Expect a response shortly!
 
Review incoming, stay back!
  • Your app is all fine and dandy, you're Approved!
 
  • April 30th, 2021 (8:53 PM PST)
    • Updated to current Proficiency rework, modified backstory to accommodate the rework, and adjusted why he returned to Regalia.
    • Added having attended a Sancellist College to receive ordainment as a Sancellist Curate, as well as the Door-Inner Huis College to become a decent orator and preacher.
@Caelamus
 
As a courtesy notice, I never added the three points that each schooling pack Dante was approved for to his proficiency spread, so I fixed that. I only added six points in Linguistics, removed Tolonne as its no longer a canon language, added Ithanian & Calem, and updated some old terminology resulting from the Unionist update!
@Caelamus
 
I'll be putting this back into review for various reasons, oversight mostly on my part because I am not as familiar with knight lore as other members of Lore Staff.
diCardinale said:
  • +3 Calemberg Ordner School​
  • +3 Divine College of Divinity​
  • +3 Door-Inner Huis College​
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Knights should not be attending schools given they are knights and should ideally be focusing more on their own insular studies to their order. This may also include religious schooling. The character should be more focused on protecting priests than becoming one themselves.

diCardinale said:
He is now a Villiers-Eclaire Knight alongside having graduated as a General.
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Equally since I can't see the full edit history. I would like to clarify you can't be a Villiers and a General. Being a knight restricts a character to being solely a knight and I cannot tell what they were actually prior, so I will be locking them in as a Villiers, this cannot be changed in the future.
 
Caelamus said:
Knights should not be attending schools given they are knights and should ideally be focusing more on their own insular studies to their order.
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Does this apply to all schools or just schooling packs, to clarify?
Caelamus said:
This may also include religious schooling. The character should be more focused on protecting priests than becoming one themselves.
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The Command and Performance schooling packs were mostly for backstory flavor and I didn't intend to utilize them so I'm fine removing them! I would however ask if there's any way to keep his Celate training, as there's definitely others who have approved Villiers-Celates?
 
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diCardinale said:
Does this apply to all schools or just schooling packs, to clarify?

The Command and Performance schooling packs were mostly for backstory flavor and I didn't intend to utilize them so I'm fine removing them! I would however ask if there's any way to keep his Celate training, as there's definitely others who have approved Villiers-Celates?
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This was also an oversight on my part because as I said prior, I am not familiar with Knight lore as I am other aspects.
 
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This was also an oversight on my part because as I said prior, I am not familiar with Knight lore as I am other aspects.
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Thank you for answering my questions, I appreciate you coming back over to make sure I was lore compliant! I understand however that there is a Knight rewrite in the works, and I'd like to ask the app be rejected until the rewrite comes out so I can just make one single edit, thank you.
 
diCardinale said:
Thank you for answering my questions, I appreciate you coming back over to make sure I was lore compliant! I understand however that there is a Knight rewrite in the works, and I'd like to ask the app be rejected until the rewrite comes out so I can just make one single edit, thank you.
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I was about to suggest that actually, I'll just leave it in review-in-progress. Just ping me whenever you're done.
 
@Atiquizaya There is no eta on the Knight Update, and since from what I recall this character is going to become a Rettist (Celate-Knight), it may be better to just stick to the current Villiers lore and be a lay-priest until those details are worked on sometime in early 2022.

If by chance you've shelved the character, just let us know here.
 
Hi, with @FireFan96 's helpful update, I have completed the changes @Caelamus has asked of me. Hopefully everything should be in order. I left a little log in the first reply to my app and in this post below:

January 4th, 2022 (12:24 PST)
  • Redid Proficiencies.
  • Updated Format to current standard.
  • Reworked backstory to only have attended the Villiers-Eclaire school, and modified his later life.
 
Atiquizaya said:
Hi, with @FireFan96 's helpful update, I have completed the changes @Caelamus has asked of me. Hopefully everything should be in order. I left a little log in the first reply to my app and in this post below:

January 4th, 2022 (12:24 PST)
  • Redid Proficiencies.
  • Updated Format to current standard.
  • Reworked backstory to only have attended the Villiers-Eclaire school, and modified his later life.
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I'm going to approve it, though I do want to say that maybe in the future whenever this needs to be re-reviewed or you feel like updating it, that you might want to clarify their faith a bit more or elaborate the real extent of it since their entire niche is based on religion and that's something I feel you should capitalize on more. Though never the less, kind of a nitpicky thing, it's clarified well enough as is and the general expectation is that you portray him with a devout sense of faith.
 
@Caelamus
I was itching to play Dante recently and updated his app to the current standard:

October 12th, 2022 (4:48 CST)
  • Updated Proficiencies to the current system.
  • Adjusted his culture from Anglian-Tolonne to Anglian-Ithanian (Tolonne).
  • Switched from the old two-sentence Core Concept format to the current format.
  • Added an expansion of his beliefs and some backstory Proficiency explanations in this color.
 
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@Caelamus Minor proficiency tweaking. Didn't make sense for him to have so much Wisdom so I reallocated it into other things.
November 23rd, 2022 (7:30 CST)
  • Removed Hotiere pack and three points from Wisdom.
  • Added one point to Strength and took the Warrior pack.
  • Added one point to Constitution and took the Protectorate pack.
  • Added one point to Charisma and took the Trampling pack.
  • Added and removed all respective abilities gained & lost.
 
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