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Played Character ❀ Amelina Peirgarten - Pink Countess ❀

This character is actively played.

seoulmate

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Information
  • Full Name: Amelina Célia Peirgarten
    • Race: Ailor
      • Culture: Leutz-Vixe born, converted to Regal
  • Age:31
    • Birthdate: December 3rd, 280
  • Gender: Female
  • Archon: Envoy Archon of Gaia
Core Concept
  • Amelina is a Countess, hailing from her lands of Lorhaus. She is an Envoy Archon who wishes to bring peace and unity to the Dragons and those that would otherwise be outcasts to the other Dragon People. She works to host events, bring people together, and ensure cohesiveness when working together. Though she's dealt with strife, she overcomes with her head held high and a smile willing to work with those who would otherwise put her down.
Appearance
  • Eye Color: A vibrant lilac that softly glows
  • Hair: She has naturally curly dark brown hair, but often colors it blonde or pink, wearing it often in locs or braids.
  • Height: 5'1"
  • Body Type: Soft and plump, her noble life settling in.
  • Other Features: She has various scars, as well as beauty marks on her face.
Proficiencies
  • Magic: 9
    • Arcane Barrier
    • Arcane Healing
    • Arcane Aura
    • Arcane Snare
    • Arcane Distortion
    • Arcane Cleanse
    • Arcane Warp
    • Arcane Shove
    • Arcane Revive
  • True Mage Combat: 3
    • Arcane Medic
    • Arcane Puppeteering
    • Arcane Eruption
  • Charisma: 2
    • Political Presence
    • Fame Presence
  • Combat Style: Healer and Mage
  • Dimension: The Anima and The Dictact
  • Magic Schools: Elemental, Mend, Evergrowth
Languages
  • Lëtz
  • d'Ithanie
  • Anglian
  • Altalar
Plot Hooks
A Countess is Born
  • Amelina was born an Archon, to her Archon mother and Mundane father, due to the disdain her father felt towards Archonism and the Dragons, Amelina was forced to hide her purple eyes for years, donning green contacts to keep people from knowing what she really was. Her family kept the patriarchal status until her fathers untimely death, seeing as no sons were born, Amelina's mother took over as matriarch until she was of age.
Magic, Education, and More
  • Amelina was taught from a young age to pick up something she truly wanted to learn, that was alchemy and healing. Her magic was kept dormant until she was a young child, being taught by private tutors who would keep her status a secret. During this time she married Count Ruzgar Sever with whom she had a single child with. Their divorce was public and tumultuous, though it's something Amelina moved past and quite often never talks about anymore.
The City of Regalia
  • Coming to the city brought forth many troubles for the Countess, from people trying to take her lands, her reign as Lord Chancellor and her divorce. With a new outlook on life the Countess has found love once more with Lyonel Deceres and she now works towards uniting the Archon with other city goers while continuing to be the social butterfly that she is, wooing nobles and commoners alike. Her goals have always been to try and connect the Archon with the people of the city, though she's found that wish to be more and more difficult as she realizes the stubbornness of the people around her.
 
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Your Application looks great! Just fantastically written. I hope you get her approved very soon!
 
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Although not outward and not done any more, her family treated her and her sisters like slaves when she was younger.

I believe she was referring to her family at one point treating her and her sisters like slaves. She is not saying her resentment is not done anymore, but the treatment from her family isn't done anymore.

I love this app and can't wait to RP with Amelina some more! Beautifully written.
 
I believe she was referring to her family at one point treating her and her sisters like slaves. She is not saying her resentment is not done anymore, but the treatment from her family isn't done anymore.

I love this app and can't wait to RP with Amelina some more! Beautifully written.

Oh! Oops! Right, I can see that now. Not sure how I might have missed that-- Ahah! I'm much too tired for this right now.
 
My Review:
  • Where was she born? Given how she is Ithanian-cultured, the way her family treated her given their generally matriarchal and female-based society is odd.
  • What was her family's status? You mention an estate in Regalia but it sounds like you mean out in the countryside, which I think is most rural with the estates there occupied by major Regalian noble families.
  • How did the dead Alexandre who was going to Jorrhildr somehow come back as a Deathling despite the fact that "Only characters with a valid grave either in the church, or the graveyard, can rise as a Deathling. Characters that died outside Regalia also cannot rise, but the base line is that any character that died at the hands of the authorities as a criminal cannot rise."
Please tag me once the edits have been done in green @seoulmate
 
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My Review:
  • Where was she born? Given how she is Ithanian-cultured, the way her family treated her given their generally matriarchal and female-based society is odd.
  • What was her family's status? You mention an estate in Regalia but it sounds like you mean out in the countryside, which I think is most rural with the estates there occupied by major Regalian noble families.
  • How did the dead Alexandre who was going to Jorrhildr somehow come back as a Deathling despite the fact that "Only characters with a valid grave either in the church, or the graveyard, can rise as a Deathling. Characters that died outside Regalia also cannot rise, but the base line is that any character that died at the hands of the authorities as a criminal cannot rise."
Please tag me once the edits have been done in green @seoulmate
I believe all of the edits have been done! The families sheet is undergoing a massive rewrite, so I can link that whenever it is finished if you would like! I also believe I lost the 'Review in Progress' tag, but since I'm tagging you I assume that is okay?

@The_Shadow_King3
 
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I've updated this to fit the new format and make changes as she is no longer a Celyreos.
Figured I would tag it as "Needs Reviewer" as I want to make sure it is all good to go!
@HydraLana
 
Updated for the proficiency system!
My Review:
  • I ask you reexamine your Cultural Points to ensure everything is allocated properly and the way you want it.
  • Please add a Languages section where it is appropriate in the Character Application format.
  • Please delete the Talents section as it is no longer part of the template.
Tag me once this has been done in green @seoulmate
 
From what I can tell, no issues, Re-Approved.
 
@seoulmate Hey app looks great, just need two things from you. Please specify which branch of Artificer your character is taking in parentheses next to the applicable packs. Please specify in parentheses next to your Magic investment either Void or Exist, to note the planar alignment of your characters Magic. @tag me when edits are made